All Comments on 'Another Tasty Creampie'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
It Was Good

Even though, there are a lot of plot holes. This would be a good basis for a series of stories. Please continue.

justagirlatheartjustagirlatheartabout 7 years ago
Just a thought

It was different and I liked it... 5 star

ApathaleneApathaleneabout 7 years ago
Ignore the way too dedicated troll

In terms of prose and construction your story is a bit raw, but it's nothing that won't improve with practice.

Content wise it's is entirely my jam and I'll be looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Jennyflower4Jennyflower4about 7 years ago
Loved it

Please ignore the troll. I really like the concept of this story

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