All Comments on 'It Just Happened'

38 DD tits and bald pussy. How many times have we seen this before?? At least the kid didn't have a 10" dick, like so many of them seem to.

Your premise is a good one, but you need to fill out the story more. Some background/back story on the characters and how they know each other. Raw sex can be fun, don't get me wrong, but this really leaves a lot of untied strings. Also, proofread, proofread, proofread. There are several spelling and grammatical errors that grate on the inner voice while reading the story that are distracting. Stay at it, but work more on building the story.

As previously stated, reread and correct your story before lodging.

If MILF had been over servicing husband at the start, it's odd that hubby is now once a month while toy boy is thrice weekly. Surely a cause for suspicion. Keep the home fire burning too. Toy boy will retire sooner or later, to a younger bimbo.

Just saying.