by nonamesusie
It would be truly fucking amazing if she actually did kill him. The way you worded the last sentence, I'm not sure whether you meant this to be the last chapter, with an implication that the king would die as a given? This is/was a story I'll be reading again. Thanks for posting it!
Then we wouldn't have read any more of this junk.
Enjoyed the tidbits of world building you did here, like their very strict gender roles and garb. I would love to read more about our heroine perhaps being taught their customs, or learning things from her witnessing other's interactions. They seem to come from two very different cultures, and I can't wait to find out more details! Also, gotta say, I love her gumption! Hope she always retains that, even though I'm sure none of us would be averse to him teaching her obedience, erotically at least! Thanks for sharing! 5* from me, and can't wait for the next installment!
I like this story. i like that the princess isn't a wuss and can hold her own. Keep it coming!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter this adverture is great!
this story is so refreshing yet thrilling, continue your awesome work!
Please write more chapters!!! Eager fans!!! :D
I meant to put 5 stars but accidentally pressed one and now it won't let me change it! Please please write more I'm so entrigued to know how this plays out!
I think this is super intriguing but it is confusing when the writing goes from first person to third person and back again. It should never say “her”. I want to know what happens next.
,bad girl leaving us all in suspense! 15 months is plenty of time to see a movie, have a baby, get married, go on vacation. Get with the program girl. love, me
Not sure if that was meant to be the last chapter but from those last sentences and the tense you used, does that mean she killed him already? I'm a bit confused now.
I know it's been a while since you last wrote a chapter, but I'd love more of this story.
Yes, please do continue this story. We await the next chapter.
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Well obviously not that night... because she's still sitting there while we wait for her to do SOMETHING!