All Comments on 'My First Experience after Marriage'

Your experience is very hot. Having sex while your husband is near.... my, I have to say it made me rock hard.

awesome ... made me hard

Thank you for liking my story. Will write more and more about all my experiences.

sanjaybanse here dear... Uff ur such a slut wen it comes to writing and so inocemt with ur family...oooh lala i lvd it..

That was really bold of you ! Excellent.

Tell us more.

Please get someone to help you with English.

Hey, that was a good story. Would love to know more about you. Email me at marinerslength@gmail.com if you are interested.

Lovely crisp writing and extremely erotic....trust me,you DO have a flair for writing !! Rated this 5 stars

Will look for more from you....please one suggestion -> there are nasty readers out here who will read your story and bad mouth you. Those people are retards,so DO NOT pay any attention to them,but continue your good work

Wear you wearing the saree lower than your navel ? Do you always wear saree below navel ? Do you wear deep back blouses too ? These details were not clear and a little details about your looks and sexy attire would have enhance this lovely story....hope you will put these details in next input from you

Thanks

Thanks for the nice comments. I would write more for sure now. And for people asking, yes I always wear saree below my navel. I think that it makes wearing saree more sexy as the belly button and waistline can be enjoyed by hungry eyes. I also love to wear deep back and deep neck blouses often. It shows the shape and my smooth skin.

It is confusing. A lot of us don't speak any Indian languages, and since this is an English site read by people all over the world, it makes it difficult if we have to go back and google some of the words to figure out what they mean. Breaks up what was a nice piece of writing.

Otherwise, nicely done.

Hi there,

I appreciate your efforts to pen down this story and post it. Content wise, it was hot. The way you created the character of the lead woman and transformed her from a homely Marwari bahu to a slutty chick in the one page write up is commendable considering that's it's your first effort. Yes, I would surely want to read more with more graphic details about your dressing and especially your inner conflict between being a good wife/daughter-in-law and being a wanton slut who needs to quench the thirst of her cunt.

For the Indian crowd, this story is just perfect but just in case you want a few more likes from folks around the globe, I can volunteer to help you in editing your next story

Once again, good story but you can do a lot better

Love,

~ Aakash

Great awesome job ... would like to befriend u for more fun... u can reach me on dhcpraghav@gmail.com...

For a first timer it's good writing. People think you are a girl but I have got some doubt about it. Anyway next time try to be little realistic. But any way narration is quite sexy and tempting. It made me hard. Soon you will see one of my erotica stories on this time. Well done sweetheart. Good luck.

I am happy with the story Sapna / RAJNI.......i hope u bask in your new found freedom. Life without remorse ......great story ....me from Mumbai. I love the Marwadi style of wearing saree without make-up making u look seductively hot.

आजारी भावाला मुंबईला घेऊन जाताना मी व मीरावहिनीने रेल्वेतच संभोग केला. व नंतर घरी अनेकवेळा.

त्यांच्या भरगच्च नितंबांनी मला वेड लावले होते.

आणि ती रसाळ टाईट योनी.

त्याला कळले पण तो काही बोलला नाही उलट तिचे समाधान होण्यासाठी आम्हाला एकत्र वेळ दिला.

Excellent story.. even it happened to me but in different way

I was never fucked but kissed many times by strangers in train