All Comments on 'My Brother Thinks I Am Asleep'

Very hot, i liked it.. keep writting

I think this was a great story overall. You're defintely talented at setting the scene for a hot story. I would have liked to hear more about her thoughts as her brother attempted to pull down her panties. It would have also been nice if her brother spoke to her softly and sweetly while he approached her that first night... soft enough not to "wake her up" that is. And finally, this story could have been stretched out... when she "awakes" after he enters her, perhaps you could have talked about the non-verbal communication between the two siblings. Were they staring knowingly into each other's eyes? Was there any shame or guilt? Was it purely lust or was there a bit of love?... stuff like that...

but please...KEEP WRITING. I enjoyed it.

Don't want to miss the part when she finds out she's pregnant!

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!! GOD IT GOT ME SO DAMN HORNY TIL I HAD TO GOT GET A ELECTRIC RAZOR AND STICK IT TO MY PUSSY AND VIBRATE IT SO I COULD COME.

I felt you spent way too much time on character development. I was wondering when you would get to the chase and give us some action! It was all about their relationship and place, torment and conflict of emotions. For heavens sake, we want to read about the sex, not be transported to someone's mind!

Yor know how to write a sexy story... I dont mind telling you that your story actually made me stroke myself... and it was great... thank you :)

when i was reading i could just picture this and it made me hornier and hornier i want to read over it and bring out the vibrator this was awesome maybe i will fuck me brother

this story was GREAT! Makes me want to fuck my sister!

DFone my two siters like thta since they were teens and we have done it over 345 times and only nce did they get pregnancy srars.

well i didnt lyk it at all and he didnt stick him dick in me. But the first few times it felt good but as it keap happening i got tired of it so i cant sllep any where out of my room or he will try to fuck me again. i have never told ant one this but i would lyk to sleep on the couch with out getting raped!!HELP!!wat do i do?!?!?!

ohh myy did he use a condom ?

Absolute fantastic i would cum everywhere oh yes !!!

This story is the same as me.I also fuck my sister when she is asleep.Later she woke up and told me to fuck her harder.

Very exciting!!I I once fucked my sister while she stayed home after a party and as bedrooms had to be shared and her ,being alone as her husband was overseas ,she chose to sleep in my bed .she thought i was sleeping and i saw her getting undressed.she came under the cover with only her black string on her.i was so horny that after 5 minutes i turned myself and rubbed my stiff cock against her very beautiful croop.she suddenly turned backed and kissed me savagely.she grabbed my cock and sucked it.I also sucked her very hairy pussy.we fucked like animals.this was an unforgettable night.she told me later that her husband had been ignoring her since 3 months!!we still fuck as often as possible.she is a fantasic sister

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wow a brother fucking a sister gosh whats next a father

you must have some great sister i loved this story i'm sooo horny if i did this to one of my sisters they would of told my mum and shouted at me for real :)

i would so want my brother to so that to me the story made me so wet! i loved it!!!!

when we were teenagers, my brother would watch me masturbate, but i wasn't aware of this until he told me one day. I would get naked and lay on my back and spread my legs open wide and slide something hard into my pussy and with my other hand, I fingered my clit until I came. I would do this daily and for at least 30 min. from where he was hiding, he could see my pussy very well and I know he was jacking off watching. i went to his room once and he told me he wanted to feel his cock on my pussy just to see what it felt like so we each pulled our pants down and our underwear and kneeled down and he took his cock in his hand and began to rub my whole pussy with it. he never put it in me but now i wish he would have. i think about him and his cock a lot, many years later and wish he would fuck me. i think about his hard cock whenever i masturbate and wonder if he still thinks of my pussy.. true story

Oh my god! I read this story the other day on my eighteenth birthday. I went to bed that night still a virgin and wishing my brothers would take turns on me like in this story. A few days later I was rereading the story when the I heard the UPS truck pull up. I ran downstairs to be waiting at the door so I could sign for the box of sex toys I ordered online, before one of my brothers could get the package. When I went back upstairs to open my eagerly awaited package, I saw one of my college age brothers rushing out of my room and into the hallway bathroom. That night I fucked myself silly with the new vibrating dildos, but still felt empty because I longed for the real thing reaming my tight virgin pussy.

I woke up in the middle of the night cumming and realized a hot, wet tongue was fucking my pussy. Over the next few nights my three brothers had each had their way with me while I feigned sleep. In our pool I confronted them and told them I knew each of them had pleausered themselves inside me. My older brother objected, saying none had actually taken my cherry so I was still a virgin and could not get them in trouble. I pointed out that oral sex without consent was still rape. They all went white as ghosts and pleaded with me not to tell. I let them beg and sweat it out for a while, then offerred up a deal. " We all go back to college within six weeks...unless I call the cops and you go to jail instead. So here's the deal. I expect one of you to come to my room after the folks are asleep and take my cherry. After that I expect to be properly fucked by each of you every night." They didn't need much arm-twisting to agree. Thanks to my brother reading this story on my computer I had the best summer of my life! I owe it all to you, so please feel free to visit me in my sleep anytime. I will be eagerly waiting!

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it made me so wet I started fingering myself!

i m 15yrs old. i m indian when i read this i was thinking to have sex with my brother. but i thought he was not like that. one night i sleep naked. i wake up at midnight n my pussy was wet. i wanted somebody to fuck me. i walk naked to my brother room he was sleeping. i unzipped is pant n started sucking his cock. after sometimes he wake up. he saw me naked then afterward we had sex

great story.....got me very horny...i had a chance to fuck my sister one night...but i got scared....we were sharing a bed some time ago.. i could'nt sleep that night but my sister was out, i kept trying to wake her up so we could talk but she slept lyk da died anyway i got a hard on from nowhere so i decided to try have sex with her "my sister has the perfect ass great tits" she was wearing a bum shot that was tight on her...her butt chicks were jus hanging...i starting rubbing her butt chicks..& her thighs...then out of the blue she opens her legs wide open...i put my hand in her bum shots and strarted fingering her...man her pussy was hot n wet and i could tell she had good pussy...she was whispering fuck me...so am abt to get on top of her and do it...... my mom knocks on da door...i went back to sleep so quick....the next day my mom told me i will stop sharing a bed with my siser anymore...i didnt ask y....since then am afraid of trying it again...but i want to have sex with her

i my self feeling why i missed that chance....like that...iam jealous..

I'm so wet right now .. I wish my 17

Year old brother would do that 2 me :(

My sister used to cum in my room wen i would be sleepin and wake me up jus to eat her pussy and fuck her.. This was wen we were younger but man do I miss it.. I would eat my sisters pussy again in a heartbeat.. I have an even younger half sister who loves wen I touch her while she pretends to be asleep.. Panties soaked by the time I even touch them

ok this was great.... i have mi own little story to tell about me and mi brother...

Me and mi brother used to have to share a bed and one night when my parents went away for a couple day i was sleep and i had a dream about him lickin mi pussy but it wasnt a dream he slipped under the covers thinking i was asleep and i wasnt he licked it so hard and he even used a electric toothbrush on me mi pussi got so wet and then i acted like i woke up and i said to him ive wanted u for a long time and he already knew what that meant so he slipped down his pants and started to rub it and i moved the covers and started to suck it read hard and then i layed down legs wide spread and he entered mi pussy nice and clean shaved just that night had been fucked and as he got deeper and deeper i got loader and loader that weekend mi parent were on a vacation for 9 days so we did it in the morning afternoon and at night for 9 days and even though mi parent came home he would still fuck me in the night while COVERING MI MOUTH that was the best sex i ever had in mi life and im hoping when he comes home tonigh we will do it again...

im soo fucking hard ... Any girls that need some dick or wanna just talk dirty send me an email troyakagod@yahoo.com

I am so jealous I wish I had a brother to do this type of stuff.

I want my brother to fuck me like that! I've seen his cock and its so big:) I want it in my pussy sooo bad

all u fucking people are fucking crazy....how the fuck can you just fuck your own brother?? desperate for dick go meet a man dat doesnt have your own blood you incesting bitches..

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hi i am now 35 and i start fucking my cousin in the age of 18 , and u should be happy to know that i hav fucked her 10 years witout any absnt, she used to live in my room and we studied togethr at late night , we watch sexy books , she sucks my cock so hard , and she loves to ride my cock ,as she is married now bt we still manage sum time for our game, i lv her cunt

this was not so long but it got the job done THANX XX

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i love my sister i want to fuck her pussy and anal but she dosnt let me fuck her help me how can i fuck her my mail tominfo60@yahoo.com

is cunt, not 'pussy'. 'Pussies' are for North American wimps.

Now that depends whether you're a crude bastard like yourself, now doesn't it? And explain how the word pussy makes one a wimp you ignorant twit. Wow, literotica, lately has attracted all kind of idiots, just read the comments.

not only did my brother watch me masturbate very often when we were teenagers, when we were a little younger we made tents in the basement and had slept in them. He used to pull off my jammies and underwear and play with my pussy. He rubbed my clit, making me wet, making me spread my legs open wide so he had all the access he wanted. He pushed his finger inside of me while he jacked himself off. He never fucked me, I wish he had, but he made me cum over and over. We got naked whenever we could together. I am masturbating now, remembering my legs spread wide for him. He liked seeing my pussy wide open for him, watching me cum for him as he came.

Hey I'm from north america and I don't mind being a pussy... But that makes you a dick... You are what you eat

So how long have you been doing the mattress mombow. Are you still doing it. Maybe you guys should live togather as a married couple & knock out a few kids. Now that would be awasome.

Was it exciting?

Let me tell you my story: My Brother's Love for me

I was 16 and my 18 year old brother had a party when I was asleep and our

parents were gone on a trip. A couple people came in my room and they thought

I was still asleep. Some guys cock hit my face! I pretended to sleep. Some

girls big nipple slipped in my mouth. I made a noise. After, the party ended and my

brother was watching something. I quietly sneaked up on him. He was watching porn! A girl was screaming "O-o-h baby! Yeah fuck me you stupid bastard!" I watched her pussy getting licked. Just as I was about to leave, my brother heard my footsteps! He said "don't tell mom and dad hon," I said "Ok! I won't!" i wanted him to leave me alone. So as I went to my room, Tyler pulled me up close and said "Fuck me" I said "No" he licked my tongue and took my shirt off. He licked my nipples and pussy! The next day when Mum and Dad came she didn't know anything that happened. She told Tyler, "you can babysit again," and me and Tyler were happy cause I wanted to get my nipples sucked again. He visited me in my room every summer. When I was 18 he wanted to marry me. He took me to a hotel and proposed. But I said no, so as usual, he fucked me till I agreed (Which I didn't) so he won't ever let me date or marry anybody! I had love for him. We fucked all the time!

If I was to fuck u I know u would cum harder than u have ever b4 u would scream out for more as I fuck u deeper and harder

your brother sounds a little bit of a hottie ;) xx

That was hot and sweet. I hope it is true.

That's wrong

i want your bro to fyck me

i have a sis and i have a night rip to her room each night licking her tits and clits and she doesnt say a word he next day. she pretends to be asleep

Wen i was very young like 3,4,5,6 both my older brothers did this to me but they didn't know about each other. I liked it alot so i know how u feel

Now I'm horny :s

Now I want to fuck you

That is so FUCKING HOTTTTTT!

That made me so wet. I liked the story a lot. Wish someone would do that to me.

That was so fucking hot I squirted.

This is HOT

With ur brother -__-

?? sick

This got me so hot and wet! The story perfectly describes how a woman wants it done. And I loved how fearless he was and how he kept going without getting scared. What a man...

Hey i ate my sister's pussy and she was moaning to the top of her voice... I enjoyed the lovely taste of her pussy

u made me so hornny

this is hot, I used to have sex with my elder sister but before it I gave a sleeping pill in her drink. she never realized until now that i often fuck her and her pussy is so tight.

I don't fuck my sister I fuck my girlfriends and there friends licking a wet teen pussy Is the best and when I put my cock inside them fire first time the little moans they let out and also love the taste of pussy and there cum in my mouth x

Made me cum

Hmmmmm lovely!!!

Oh fuck. I came so fast. It was short but erotic. Wish my boyfriend would do this to me. I'm still a virgin and so is he. We haven't kissed yet though we do jack ourselves off sometimes...

oh my god, so amazing, I was trying hard not to cum just yet, I finally did but dam I wish I had. a hot sister to fuck like that

Mm so good, I was watching porn just before, and my pussy was already wet, I wish I had a guy to fuck, not a brother tho, but this is so good

He does the same thing but I'm not awake during "it" and when I wake up I hear him leaving... It's cuz were lucky to have that happen to us 😉

ONE NIGHT ICAME IN FROM DRINKING I THOUGHT I WAS IN BED WIYH MY GT BUT MY LITTLE SISTER WAS IN MY BED MY BROTHER HAD A FEW FRIENDS OVER MOM DIDNT THINK I WAS COMMING HOME I WAS 18 SHE IS 13 I DIDNT KNOW IT WAS HER IAWOKE WITH HER NEXT TO ME SHE HAD ON A LONG SHIRT AND PANTIES WHEB I ROLLED OVER I STARTED WITH MY LEG OVER HER IWAS NAKED I FELT HER ASS WITH MY DICK RUBBING DOWN HER CRACK NOW I HAVE OVER NINE INCHES OF MEAT I PULLED THEM DOWN AND T=QAS TRYING TO FUCK HER SHE DIDNT SAY ANYTHING IT WAS DRY SO I WENT DUWN ON HER THEN I GOT UN TOP AND TOOK HER CHERRY I FEEL BAD SHE SAID SHE THOUGHT SHE WAS DREAMMING IAM SORRY BUT IT WAS THE BEST PUSSY I EVER HAD

That story is so close of what we did,

Great story! 5 stars

I’m reading this while my boyfriend eats my pussy but I wish it was my brother