All Comments on 'Trucker's Curse'

You've written a terrific story here, well plotted and with engaging characters who are very sympathetic-you can really feel the struggle inside each one trying to do what's right. Well done!

I may have accidently voted 1 star for the story; if I did, I hope it can be changed to 5 stars as that was definitely a mistake. Excellent story; sorry about fat finger. Hope you continue this.

I'm not a well read individual but i love this story and i would enjoy more of this series

I'm very impressed! Very nice concept and execution, and well written. Bravo bravo.

This is a story everyone should read! Great characters, unique story, well written, and steamy hot. Well done!!

I did not find it erotic but it was still a great story.

one of the BEST story that I've ever read on literotica

Great story, interesting concept, and great execution. It was really impressive how well you tied me to the driver in just 4 pages. Great work, thanks for writing this.

Not just a stroker, but a well written balanced story. Great piece.

As a trucker myself, I found the story to be very well written and accurate. Love it. I hope there will be follow up chapters.

Well written. I like stories involving the reluctant mind controller. I do hope you decide to continue. The only bad thing is I accidentally taped 3 on the rating and I can't change it. Sorry.

This was so well written. So intricate and interesting. It was arousing but an actual story too! Alot of stories on here are just about wild uninhibited control with no thought to how it affects other (which isn't inherently a bad thing), but they can come off as creepy and rapey. Yours was so amazingly careful and caring about the victims. Thanks

I was skeptical about this story at first, but you sucked me in by page 1. I loved the struggle between them. As a submissive woman, I felt for Lisa, and was on the edge of my seat until the very end. I would love to read more stories like this!

5 stars

I like the story and it's the first thing of yours I've read. I think the protagonist is fairly unbelievable, but other than that it's good.

I really hope there will be more chapters. This story has a lot of potential. It's clear there's room for something real between Jim and Lisa, if they can figure out how to work around The Curse as much as possible. Heck, maybe his influence can protect her from others like him, thus allowing her to break her dependence on the Lanzapine. I definitely want to see where this goes.

This is a perfect story. Absolutely perfect. Thank you.

I'm very grateful for the positive response, and sincerely appreciate people having taken the time to read and comment. Thank you!

I can count on one hand how many times I've commented on this platform, but I just couldn't resist this time. This story is absolutely beautiful and I wouldn't mind reading more

I had this story open on a separate tab of my browser and looked at the story title probably a dozen times over two days. Each time I would pass it up and go read something else. I can't say why I delayed reading it or what prompted me to finally begin the story - but I'm glad I did. The closing paragraphs took my emotions from sad, to almost tearful, to confused, and finally to hopeful but scared of what lay ahead. I hope there is more to come. Thank you.

One of the very best stories in this genre for sure. Hope there is more to come...

I thought that was a great story. Well done!

This was such a fantastic story from almost every angle. Cant wait to see if/ how you'd carry on the story.

It kept me on the edge of my seat. You have to do a follow-up with them tracking down the other Cursed or even searching out her sister.

I loved the end and I quite frankly wouldn't mind a sequel!

More please :)

Very compelling story, please continue.

Do hope this is just the start of the anthology you mentioned. Though this works as an intriguing stand alone story, please continue it - hopefully for many chapters.

Jules

Excellent work. Don't make it a series, it would be anti climactic.

Curiously if he had killed himself it would have been just as good.

Did not know what to expect but after reading that... Simply Amazing.

I would recommend you leave the story there, as much as I would enjoy seeing this story develop, to go any further would distract from the true potency of the situation described.

I look forward to reading your anthology.

Extremely powerful effective story！

One of the best I've read on the site. Thanks for sharing.

Surprising, please continue

Thanks for your creativity. Really enjoyed it!

Impressed with this

Best story I’ve read on this site, amazing work!

Please please please do more when you find a writer who writes this well you want more loved it more of this curse it’s brilliant

Excellent story. You are a great writer

I loved reading this so much. Thank you for writing it

Loved it... great ending

I genuinely cried

Loved it! More, please!

Sex is good, love is way better

Amazing character development! I really cared about the people you wrote about. I really hope you start writing again!

Like the previous anonymous, I had real tears. My heart ached at his seemingly last time in the cab.

Bravo

I came to this story looking for a particular kink and thought I might find it here based on your description. I usually only go for women with mind control power over men because the reverse tends to make me feel gross as a man. I was not expecting the multiple twists that this story took, and I was enraptured by it immediately. There was genuine depth to the characters; I felt truly invested in the outcome. Your writing has a rare level of quality. It speaks to countless hours of practice coupled with an innate gift for storytelling. Thank you for sharing your valuable time and hard earned skill with us. Writing like this is a gift. We are lucky to have you on this site.

I both love and hate you. I chose this story in the hope of aiding some self love and ended up crying like my heart was breaking over the incredible story and writing. So thank you and go to hell for clit blocking me!

Great story! hope you continue :)

A wonderful piece, great twists. Not sure if a continuation is possible, but would be nice.

In my many years of reading Literotica, only 2 other stories have made me cry.

Not everyone can keep you hooked all the way through a long story. Not everyone can describe a sex scene so poignantly. And not everyone can hold the ending so close to his heart that you never even saw it coming. But let’s face it, this dude can WRITE! LoL. Thank you for making my week!

A great story, well done! Thank you for sharing this with us!

I really enjoyed this story. I wish it would have continued :(

It deserves to go on!

This is so well written and plotted, it shames the disgusting, formulaic cuck/swing authors and the dreck they produce. I could see this becoming a fantastic screenplay.

Thank you for giving us an excellent read. Your plans of the story have converted into words so seamlessly ... well, I am speechless.

I think this is the 3rd story of yours I have read and intend to read the rest. Most of the best writers I have read here no longer write. I'm thrilled to see you are actively writing. Thank you...

Great plot twist, excellent character development and dialog. More like a well written short story with good sex than the usual porn movie story line you see here.

Please continue!

Might be the best writing I've seen here. A real story, a real plot, better writing than in some professional fiction.

What a lot in 4 pages. A real emotional rollercoaster of a ride. Great writing, lead me right up to the concluding part and then the twist. Def 5 stars.

Have you thought of a sequel as you mentioned in the intro?

Please I want to read more about this story, it's so good. Is there any way you would write a sequel?

Great storytelling, characters with compelling and relatable motivations, 10/10!

Excellent! Really looking forward to part 2!

Great story. So the hunter became the lover, I like it. As for part 2 not so much, don't really need it.

They drove off into the sunset and lived happily ever after!

Great story, loved it. Perfect as is...don't really see where a second part would go with it.

Brilliant, fantastic, I couldn't stop reading. It doesn't need a part two though.

One of the best I have read in a long time. I was crying until the ending. Thank you for "hope".

Best in theme I have seen. Please make a sequel!

Awesome! Best story on Lit for a looooong time!

Woooow! Damn, now THAT is a story 🥰

Thank you sir may I have another!

i really need this to be turned into a book. Yeah, it's enough on its own but i got attached to them now.

If you don't do it, i think i will eventually have to write a story with a similar start. Too many ideas in mind

What a shame that the author disappeared. I think I'll steal this and make something of it. Homage to the beginning of a great story