by WFEATHER
Great work in combining fantasy hentai-type images with Domination and submission. This story really turned me on.
Capitalizing "Me"and other pronouns are highly distracting. Please consider crafting writings using the correct structure.
I didn't even notice any spelling or grammar errors in my reading, it was very compelling and wonderful to read. I love stories like this, where you have the D/s, but you have the Hentai side to it. Plus anything to do with ravishing long into the night .. yummy.
Thank you for the great story and please, keep writing. I'd love to see more writing, or poems or even PM's.
Now, would you be interested in colaborating on a story?
I'm no first timer when it comes to good /D stories. It's got potential.
I agree with the capitalization of Me and My are a little distracting and confusing as to the reason why but over all the story was well written and certainly peaked my interest. Good job!
The first story I have read in a while that has actually pushed me to give it a comment.
I would give you a standing ovation for this, but my hand (tentacles!) are too busy.
Am just as much of a tentacle fan as yourself for exactly the same reasons.
What I wouldn't give to have this happen to me! I am dripping wet and quivering as I type this...and I'm going back to read it again...
title doesn't do this short story justice. would love to see some longer works from this author
just really beautiful.
master/slave stuff confuses me so I just went past it--
i enjoyed this piece if writing, i love hentai and i also really admire anime. i liked the dark element of his fantasy with the tentacles and the lighter element of the connection between master and slave and his love for her