All Comments on 'Hentai'

by WFEATHER

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EntwinedLustEntwinedLustabout 19 years ago
Nicely done.

I liked it. The tenticle thing. Nice touch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice

Definately different. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
absolutely loved it

Great work in combining fantasy hentai-type images with Domination and submission. This story really turned me on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Dominance is no excuse for incorrect grammar.

Capitalizing "Me"and other pronouns are highly distracting. Please consider crafting writings using the correct structure.

heart38valorheart38valorabout 17 years ago
If only...

Any chance of another story similar to this one? :)

MistressDarknessMistressDarknessover 16 years ago
Wonderful

I didn't even notice any spelling or grammar errors in my reading, it was very compelling and wonderful to read. I love stories like this, where you have the D/s, but you have the Hentai side to it. Plus anything to do with ravishing long into the night .. yummy.

Thank you for the great story and please, keep writing. I'd love to see more writing, or poems or even PM's.

Now, would you be interested in colaborating on a story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good job

I'm no first timer when it comes to good /D stories. It's got potential.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Breathless...

I agree with the capitalization of Me and My are a little distracting and confusing as to the reason why but over all the story was well written and certainly peaked my interest. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
First Comment ever...

The first story I have read in a while that has actually pushed me to give it a comment.

I would give you a standing ovation for this, but my hand (tentacles!) are too busy.

Am just as much of a tentacle fan as yourself for exactly the same reasons.

aliandrealiandreover 14 years ago
I want it too!

What I wouldn't give to have this happen to me! I am dripping wet and quivering as I type this...and I'm going back to read it again...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
that was awesome

title doesn't do this short story justice. would love to see some longer works from this author

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOW

Oh my fucking god....that was such a hot and steamy scene. LOVED it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wow--so beautiful--

just really beautiful.

master/slave stuff confuses me so I just went past it--

sopharoonessopharoonesalmost 10 years ago
interesting

i enjoyed this piece if writing, i love hentai and i also really admire anime. i liked the dark element of his fantasy with the tentacles and the lighter element of the connection between master and slave and his love for her

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