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I wanted to laugh,,,
....to cry, but I still had 1 helluva 'hard on'!
I LIKED IT!
As a thought, you could continue the story of the "Fall of 1970" with "Davy's" escapades at his college after his experiences in NYC..."Spring of 1971" or something. Really enjoyed the story...it was the times.
The girl/girl scene...
was amazing! When Joni licked Doreen's hairy armpit - WOW!
What an awe-inspiring sight!
Hot, hot, hot!
Big tits and hairy pits!
Your stories are totally awesome, dude! I've sprayed my shower with gallons of come after reading them!!!
More hairy pits
I just loved Doreen's furry pits but alas you described it so less.
Excellent
I seldom read multi-part stories unless each part stands alone. You're an excellent writer.
Fall 1970
This story had it all. Great fetish content with a bitter-sweet ending which left a lump in my throat.
Magnificent!
Excellent two part story and for once I wished there was more. There is no logical reason why I should be cumming on page 2 and crying on page 3! Beautiful!
Believable
You created some realistic characters and a believable plot. It flowed very well, and I found myself wanting him to find the girls. Thanks for weaving a wonderful story.
Nice piece of writing
Either you are old enough to have been around in that era or you did your research. Either way you did a good job of capturing the spirit of the times and it was dark with all of the stuff going on. Hard to believe Lori would be 74 today.
This is a very complete short story in its own right and quite touching in addition to being highly sexy. I read a lot of stuff on this site. Very little of it comes close to what you've done here. I didn't even look to see how current you are with new material. If you're still out there I hope you keep writing. .
Wonderful dialog.
I hope you're writing screenplays.
You can do it. Just keep the plot advancing.
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