All Comments on 'Something Better Ch. 02'

moreeeeee

Just wow. This is quickly becoming my favorite series. So sexy the way shes suducing him. The whole leg wrapping thing is one of my biggest fantasies ty. Dont be afraid to take it slow, i wouldnt kill to have one more chapter before she takes his cherry. At the end of the day its your story so we'll be hapoy either way you take it, just keep up the great work.

too bad cant give more then 5 stars....LOVED it.... keep workin it..:p

I cannot wait to see what happens next. Would like to see Casey and Gabbi get together officially as a couple and rub Gabbi's beauty in the ex girlfriend's face.

Maybe after graduation Casey will move in with her or something.

One thing for sure, Casey is one lucky son of a bitch and I would love to be in. His shoes.

That was so hot and the detail was great! I'd give my left nut for a Gabbi of my own!

very impressed by this second chapter. Much better than the first. Thank you for sharing with us. Very much looking forward to chapter 3.

this is the first time i'm actually commenting on a story on this site, and I can only honestly say that I hope the story doesn't end after chapter three, or that at least you will start new ones, your writing is amazing, thank you

This was amazing! Your attention to detail is on-point. I appreciate your diligence in character development. My request is that you drag the plot, and write as much as you can of the ensuing chapters (I do so enjoy it, and hope that it will not end soon)! Good work!

I'm so happy you guys like the story, and don't worry. I have much more than just 3 chapters planned :) I don't know how many exactly, but I can promise that these two have a long way to go together

I love the story so far. You are doing well for someone without an editor. Your character development is good and so are the details of the story. I only have one comment about an error that I saw several times in the two chapters so far. You make the same error I see that many writers do on this site. You use the word THEN instead of the word THAN in a sentence when than was needed. Otherwise I would give the story a big "5 stars" and an A plus for effort.

RJ

I DO HOPE THAT THERE IS MORE AND MORE OF IT...JUST SO THEY STAY TOGETHER THRU OUT IT, THEY ARE A PERFECT MATCH...!

I did not like that she left the boy out cold after getting her rocks off. Can't wait for the part when she fucks him.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Didn't think it possible but loved it more then the first chapter!!!

Love the actual story with it & the slow way to fucking not just straight to it. Still wish I was him or could find a lady like her

Thanks for all the hard work

Kisses 😘

Holy sht I loved this. So fucking hot. Please get chapter 3 made. I can't wait any longer

Seriously, I loved the first chapter but this was amazingly hot. I loved the connection they had with each other. The way you described everything, like the sounds that Casey kept making while he was trying to deep throat her cock, that was all very well written. I loved the whole wrapping her legs around him thing and especially when she really got rough with him. Damn, this was great! I haven't enjoyed a story quite this much in a while...I'm really excited for whatever comes next and like everyone else has said, I hope this series goes on for a few more good chapters.

Awesome!! Very addicting! Come on chapter 3 and more!!

really good, make more please ;3

I'm enjoying the engrossing narrative. Your dialogue is so natural, sweet, sexy, caring, nasty. Great combination of emotional elements. Just a quick suggestion though. Probably because I'm mostly into girls, for some weird reason I'm loving the idea of Casey getting the chance to fuck Abbi. It'd be really hot to let them each do a role reversal.

Can't wait for ch 3.

One hell of a story and writing! This chapter was hot! I'm going to re-read it and then be a good boy and wait patiently for Ch 3 - Take it!

Good story please continue

Are you going to update this? Its rare to see a Dickgirl x Boy relationship as genuine as this, and I really love it.

I hope you'll write more; it's one of my favs!

Any plans on continuing the story ?

Of course I will continue this story. It's my baby :3 lol im just tied up in commissions right now, and they do come first. Once I finish up with them I will update this story :)

Hi. I hope you plan on continuing this wonderful story. You have an amazing talent. Thank you for sharing.

Love this series as well your others

This is definitely going in the bookmarked to check for next part later folder.

Soooo good! Favorited! Please keep us updated on the next chapter!

I love the average love feel this story has, nothing over the top or ridiculous, just 2 people in love 🍆🍑💦💖

Very good and well written story, I'm just hoping that you will write/post number three soon 8-)

When are you continuing this story? Cant wait for more Gabbi.

This is a wonderful series. I hope you will continue it past chapter 3.

The way Casey`s so-called "Girl friend' treated him, Gabbi is "Something Lots Better."

This whole series is hotter than the sun! And romantic too! Love it! I could read several chapters.Thank you for writing this. So well done.

Absolutely love the extreme detail of the sex scenes, really gets me going and puts the "erotica" into Literotica 😍 Thanks for sharing!