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After Everything and Nothing

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone07/04/04

great end lines

resume, need I say more?

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by Tathagata07/05/04

very

powerful and bleak
and yeah
That ending was perfect
Nice job
Thank you

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by LeBroz12/17/06

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Two conditions possible under the way this ends here;
One is tragic and unnecessary, the other just merely tragic.

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by duddle14601/20/07

Loneliness.

Sounds like Someone sleeping single ~ in a double bed.

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