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by twelveoone07/05/04

Very nicely done

never heard morning quite described this way, nicely avoids the cliche of gray. Very nicely done!
"The sky is turning to milk,
gray pearlesence; the birds
are speaking.
The night breathes its dying sibilance."

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by Tathagata07/05/04

Everyone

is better than the one before.
I wish I could describe the pictures I see in these
just gorgeous, languid, timeless lovers.
These really are paintings, works of art.
and the words......
Seductive
Some of your best writing ever
Thank you

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by lipsticksunset198407/05/04

Just...

....beautiful....plain and simple.

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by LeBroz10/25/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.



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