by XtinaSmith2017
... Please let a sequel follow, let Ash meet the niece and let them become a lovely couple :)
Very hot. I'd like to see a sequel, but unless the niece has a dick like her aunt I'd rather just see him fool around with his neighbor some more. In fact, I kinda expected it to just be the two of them, since she tried so hard to get him in her bed.
Holy wow, please do more of this. I was a little surprised at how fast she's ready to introduce him to her niece. (Who I'm assuming also has a cock) but I really loved this, and I can't wait for more!
This was just perfectly written. Except for the reuse of some adverbs, it was vibrant all the way throughout and the content itself left me wanting more!
Loved the story, I can't wait to read what Laura and her niece do to Ash, especially if her niece is as well endowed as her.
I love your story, please bring in elements of making ash cross dress or become trans too.
More of these two..and soon! The seduction dance between them is now completed..let's see where this goes with all the kinky possibilities! Fantastic so far!!
That was one of the best i have read in a long time ;) You are now on my favorite list . Thank you and keep up the good work .
Laura is Ash's mom's best friend. She had to know what Laura did for a living. She also had to know what Laura wanted with her son. She probably also knew that Laura was a futa. Which means Ash was set up to become Laura's boy toy with his mother's help. Why? With parents like that, who needs enemies.
Best I've read in a long time. Hope more cumming. Will she dress him up for her sister and friends? can't wait.
A very enjoyable story so far; it will be fun to see where you take it next
Such an amazing story, id like to hear more of their sexploits, added to my favourites
This was exciting, fresh and great stroke material too! It's not often that there is such a combination. Like everyone else, I am hoping for much more in this story, so if it is in you, please continue for another couple of chapters.
Thank you for writing and posting here.
Loved it keep writing please
I wish I has a hot milf next door with a little extra
My undies are soaked in precum! Why did I read this at work? Now I have to wait until I get home and read it again as I reenact it with my veiny life like dildo, thank you and keep the story going so many possibilities!!!
Oh my what a climax it made me so wet and horny to be Ash in need to try to get off with a hot chick with a thick long hard cock to suck and ride like a sissy slut! Thank you for a great story!
One of the best stories on this site I've ever read I think. As another comment pointed out - his mother had to know what she did for a living, having known her for years - so it seems like she helped her seduce him. I really hope that's true personally, because then I could hope for his mother actually having been his father all along, and she can join in on the fun as well. Especially considering you've done incest stories before. That one is incredible too, but this one being consential just works alot more for me.
And how fun would it be if the niece was one of his friends lol. At least I hope she can be his "official" girlfriend at school with Laura being the "real" girlfriend and his mother "taking care of him" at home. Not to mention Laura's other friends :) This could turn into a real epic, I think.
IMHO some crossdressing is fine, I think, considering his already feminine features, but please don't go too far with it like giving him surgical alterations or make him crossdress 24/7 or make him go to school like that (at least not if everyone knows it's him). Could be fun to get him to dress up and just go out in the town over and everyone will think he's a girl and maybe have some fun in semi-public places (though PLEASE NOT with other guys lol).
Anyway, totally legendary story and hope you'll continue it. 5/5, would give more if I could.
Loved it, another great story from you. Not quite sure how the niece thing will pan out, but I hope you will be writing some more to this story.
Thanks
This is a great story, good writing and a cute story (something far too many futa/shemale stories lack). I'm personally hoping that the niece has a pussy. My preference is always to have a bit of both, TS and GG.
Great story! I would have liked more of a her breaking him into it instead him just dropping to his knees but other than that perfect
can u plz tell us when we can expect the next chapter?
i think every one that reading this story is looking forward to it
so plz, just share an estimate date with us
Fantastic story, great sex scenes, but damn did you go fast. I know it's smut, but at least have him somewhat unsure about having sex with a shemale, not to mention his ass that went from virgin to anaconda eater in minutes.
Thank you all for your wonderful feedback, for those asking when the next installment is Southern Hospitality was voted to be the next chapter I work on, so I'm writing it now! And to anon regarding the speed, it's very hard finding balance between story and smut that's engaging to people who mainly like to see one, or the other, it did move fast and he did go from zero to that's a big dick in my butt and i'm loving it very quickly, but sometimes a couple of sacrifices have to made here and there to keep the full narrative and my desired work length. But it's an area for improvement that I recognize and will try to work on! Although the story I've just finished and that will be uploaded very shortly has a boy in it that goes from zero to blowjob king in about five seconds flat so, maybe expect progress from the next story after x)
Unbelievably erotic!! Had me hanging (all but one body part ;) on every word.
XTina so Good. Onto the 2nd part. How can it get better?
Teddy Bear Club
Chrissie
TBC
Never in my wildest imagination could I have possibly envisioned such a perfect deflowering!
Loving, tenderly slow, deliciously narrated moment by moment... OMG, sheer bliss!
Bravo!
JUST PLAIN AND SIMPLE, HOT...AN SO WELL WRITTEN...! BETTY jo xoxo
Great story and very hot. Love how Ash finds acceptance in a mature woman’s arms. Looking forward to reading the others in the series. Thank you!
I love your work and this is just another great page turner. Hope to see the niece in a future story. Or maybe you already did. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing with all of us.
>Their neighbour, and his moms best friend, Laura, had recently entered the modern age by acquiring herself a laptop, and while this on it's own didn't present Ash with an issue, what his mom had offered most certainly did.
>She rolled her hips, eager to press deeper, but reluctant to force and maybe hurt him, after all, she didn't want this to be a one-time affair. If she got her way this would be a daily activity, one she could even invite some friends along to..
Shes not really a good best friend, then, if she’d treat her best friends son like a common whore for other people to fuck.
Good that she turned him over so she could watch him as she fucked him and you could have spent several paragraphs describing that alone. Wish you had. Still, nice session of seduction. Why even mention a niece though?
Great story.im looking forward to part 2. This one has so much tender passion. Nice writing. I haven’t looked at the rest of your stories but I will.
Super and beautifully written. Describes real anal sex perfectly. I so love it when they cum in me.
I wish I had met someone like her when I was young, to have my first sexual experience like that.
Very nice. A meld of my 2 fav fetishes - Mature woman & young man and tgirl fucking guys. Nice work.
Awesome Story!! Made me extremely horny and hard. I love TBE whole set up with her being an IT consultant. Please keep writing as your stories are outstanding!!!
One of the very best! I'm addicted and expect to savour the remaining chapters as much, or even more ......
You left me throbbing and breathless!!! Thank you.
That is a wonderful story and so well written. I was transfixed on every word. I could envision being the young guy each step of the way. So erotic and so sensual a story. Thank You
Hmmm, loved this story. I could see myself letting her have her way with me. After I had mine. At 6'4 and built like a lumber jack with 60" chest and 42" waist. There is nothing girly about my body and 11" kielbasa between my legs.
One of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. I’m so jealous of Ash. It was so wonderful being able to relive my teenage years, thoughts I have been reliving in my mind ever since and would love to experience again.
Love the slow build up, (will mother find out what Laura really did to her son..?)...What will be the outcome of the 2 cameras that were filming..? Is the neice a TS too..? Options for the next installment(s) are endless..Needless to say..thank you for an enjoyable tale.