All Comments on 'In The Right Place'

by ruminator

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cookiejarcookiejaralmost 20 years ago
Finally...

It's up!! I meant the story Rumey! Good work, now get out there and write more!

biggbear8biggbear8almost 20 years ago
great story

very very good ruminator lots of passion and lust great sex scene I love it keep on writing and I ll keep reading and voting thx you for sharing your story and passion

keep up the great writting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
What a debut!

GREAT story, Rumi! Very hot and extremely well written. Now, get writing more!

Lou

xxx

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Wow!!!!

Very impressive!!!!

Like they said, get to writing more!!! ;-)

sacksackalmost 20 years ago
Oh, So that's how you write a sex scene!

Really powerful writing, this is a story to be proud of!

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinalmost 20 years ago
Good Job...

...especially for an old Rumi. :)

Now where can I find that mall?

RF

neonlyteneonlytealmost 20 years ago
Sexy Story

Great job Rumi. Delighted to see it posted. There is something fiercely erotic about changing stools, so near, so obvious, so public!

neon

kaytekaytealmost 20 years ago
Very hot and playful

That is a marvelous story!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I am looking forward to your next one!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I loved it but...

I loved it but I didn't get the usual rush in my pants that makes me unbutton them revealing a few drops of precum that usually resh out of my cock when I read erotic fiction. Great story though.

cloudycloudyalmost 20 years ago
Hell of a story!!!

I love this story, Rumi, and I'm so glad you submitted it! Great job, sweetheart...more, more, more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
OK except...

The story was good except the story didn't get me into the feeling of almost hornyness like the other stories.

Anonymous
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