very very good ruminator lots of passion and lust great sex scene I love it keep on writing and I ll keep reading and voting thx you for sharing your story and passion
keep up the great writting
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07/07/04
What a debut!
GREAT story, Rumi! Very hot and extremely well written. Now, get writing more!
That is a marvelous story!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I am looking forward to your next one!!!
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Anonymous07/09/04
I loved it but...
I loved it but I didn't get the usual rush in my pants that makes me unbutton them revealing a few drops of precum that usually resh out of my cock when I read erotic fiction. Great story though.
English
Finally...
It's up!! I meant the story Rumey! Good work, now get out there and write more!
great story
very very good ruminator lots of passion and lust great sex scene I love it keep on writing and I ll keep reading and voting thx you for sharing your story and passion
keep up the great writting
What a debut!
GREAT story, Rumi! Very hot and extremely well written. Now, get writing more!
Lou
xxx
Wow!!!!
Very impressive!!!!
Like they said, get to writing more!!! ;-)
Very hot!
Loved it!
Oh, So that's how you write a sex scene!
Really powerful writing, this is a story to be proud of!
Good Job...
...especially for an old Rumi. :)
Now where can I find that mall?
RF
Sexy Story
Great job Rumi. Delighted to see it posted. There is something fiercely erotic about changing stools, so near, so obvious, so public!
neon
Very hot and playful
That is a marvelous story!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I am looking forward to your next one!!!
I loved it but...
I loved it but I didn't get the usual rush in my pants that makes me unbutton them revealing a few drops of precum that usually resh out of my cock when I read erotic fiction. Great story though.
Hell of a story!!!
I love this story, Rumi, and I'm so glad you submitted it! Great job, sweetheart...more, more, more!
OK except...
The story was good except the story didn't get me into the feeling of almost hornyness like the other stories.
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