Sweet Agony

Now this is what love making should be!!!

The author was able to make the characters connect with each other, not just physically but emotionally. I can feel the love and passion in the story...made me sigh.
Oh how I wish I can find a guy like that! ----


:) just_meeh

WOW!!!!!!!

I have read many stories from a wide variety of sites and this one blew my panties off! It was the perfect blend of emotional connection and raw desire...I have never been so turned on. If only I could be her.............

Comma abuse

The punctuation makes reading difficult.

It merits a red "H"

I don't understand why this story isn't marked with a red "H"?? It's VERY erotic, perfectly paced and I couldn't help being moved in reading.

What a loving portrait you paint

There is having sex and there is making love. The way you painted this portrait there is no doubt in the reader's mind this was love making by a couple who are totally committed to each other. Most excellent. Thank You. Ronnie W.

amazing perfection

every component--the diction, the grammar, especially the imagery... everything was so perfect. i felt like i was there; i wanted to be her. i want that description to be my first...

never before have i read anything more perfectly arousing. you are a genius...

Amazing story...reminds me of my ex boyfriend. You can tell they are in love and it's beautiful.