...But Your Enemies Closer

This was

Perfection, a word i do not use lightly.

Outstanding!

This story was absolutely outstanding! The trials both went through from high school to the end was top notch! Thank you for sharing your talent with us all!

Wonderful!

It's rare that a story brings out almost every emotion in me. This is one of those stories! Amazing! From a critical perspective, the characters and their development are engrossing, and it was amazing to watch them slowly let their guard down and admit their love for each other, which had gone unrequited for so long.

From a fangirl perspective... *swoon* OMG they're so adorable I want to know more about the wedding what did their dresses look like I betc they were adorable it's too much AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! *squee!* *faint!*

Bravo. ;)

Oh how I have missed you......!

Kenna, That was absolutely perfect! Thank you.......

You write so wonderfully.... i cried at the happy parts and at the sad parts. That probably says enough!

Affectionately yours

Corinne xxxx

Yeeeeees!!! You're back :)

Okay, wrong way around, I know. Going to read now but just wanted to say I did a little jig when I saw you uploaded another story. Thank you in advance for a very pleasant evening because I just know this is going to be good :D.
Xx from Holland, Fem

very good

at first I thought emmy had a problem letting go of the past, but she slowly learned to let the past stay the past, that said welcome back, also I think this would have been a little shorter if you did not keep flashing back to high school, I have spend the whole day reading this and still had to skip the last 5 pages but then again I am not good with very long stories, but as always this is just my opinion

Wow.

Another one of your great stories yet again. I had tears when Emily and Becca said those three small words to each other that everyone longs to hear. I could have read another twenty two pages. Five stars of course.

Spectacular

WOW What a brilliant read. Everything about the story was so well developed. Five Stars wish I could give more.

10+ if they had it

I loved this story even if it was a bit long.

Loved it!

Didn't want it to end

You keep

Racking up more story's that seem like there is just a couple chapters from being truly finished. but it was excellent as all the rest hoping to see a 2nd chapter for each of your story's.great character development and interesting concept that she was hiding her true self behind, probably because she was so worried about her reputation in high school that if she showed her true self she would have been shunned and possibly had all the evil things she did to Emmy done to her as well

Beautifully written love story

This is one of my favorite stories ever! Emmy and Becca are well developed characters complete with flaws. I really felt connected to them and was really happy that they were able to realize their love for each other!

Lovely story as usual

You never fail to impress me. Keep writing your head is lovely.
You're Amanda here, aren't you?

👍

I like beautiful long story.... :)❤

Absolutely Bloody Brilliant

Beautiful story!!!!

An amazing story!

Incredibly written, a wonderful plot throughout and love ❤️ ! Thank you!

I don't know....

If someone treats you like shit for four years, would you still fall in love with her?

Magnificent!

Truly astounding! Thank you very much.

Your stories don't need more chapters, they are fine as they are. This one needed better proof reading; fire your editor.

Brilliant it is!

Wow! Wow! Wow!

This is so good! OK, there are a few editorial flaws, but the plot, the development of characters and the style are magnificent. You have cost me some hours of sleep but thank you.

I only wish the friends had been Emily's instead. Or at least had one really close friend. it felt weird, at times, like it was Becca that got bullied. Ignoring that and a few other things, this was a really good story. thank you

A wonderful

talent you have. To make me slip out of my skin and see and feel other worlds. Your stories always catch me and I hope this will be only the third of many you'll allow me to read.
May there be flaws - you manage to kick in my emotions, making me addicted to continue reading, turning pages greedy for more.
If it is not for this, well than - why are stories told at all? This or that flaw I have already forgotten or did not notice at all. Your stories, the vivid characters and the romance you create and which start a living in my imagination on the opposite - I will never forget.
Thank you so much!
6 stars if I could.

Cliche yet Fantastic

My first thought about your new entry was that it is cliche. A love story about a girl who bullied another girl in highschool, only to fall in love with her years later with the added realization that the reason why she was so mean to her was because she loved her. But after a while, the ball started rolling, the story started to meld and really show the chemistry between the girls. In the beginning I sided with Emily thinking that her mean spirit towards Rebecca was well placed due to the hell she went through in the past, but after a while, they started to get on good grounds, I couldn't help but smile and hope that they fall in love and hopefully tied the knot. This story was fantastic and I hope you write more wonderful stories.