All Comments on 'My Inheritance Ch. 7'

These stories were fucking terrific! I hope you write more about the lives of Bob, Pam and the others (including Bob and Pam's children). Stories do not need to be plausible to be good.

If you have the time I would love hear more about Bob, Pam and Jane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THE STORY WAS VERY INTERESTING EVEN TO THE POINT WHERE i COULD NOT STOP UNTIL I HAD READ THE WHOLE THING. THE STORY LINE WAS WELL ORGANIZED AND MADE A PERSON FEEL LIKE THEY WERE THERE WITH THE CHARACTERS. WELL DONE.

I love the story and especially the ghostbusters. Keep in going.

why would he be bound to nany and pam bound to ron in the afterlife?

Enjoyed the entire Saga

Keep up the good work.

love it please keep going.

There just wasn't any pizzaaz. Too lackluster.

This story felt like a list of bullet points or an outline of a better story. It was readable and I enjoyed parts of it but still can't help but feel a little disappointed. Here are a few points not in any particular order

1. I never felt like I knew the main character or what he was thinking or why ge did the things he did.

2. Why did pam love him and vice versa.

3. Random gimmicks and characters kept being added to the story with no context. Like when exactly is did the MC do the research about the potion and other stuff. What is the looking glass. Why was vashtar a thing. What's up with the whole sacrificing a Virgin stuff, it's never stated that the spirits asked for it.

4. Why is Nancy the one MC ends up with in afterlife, isn't she just a random person he selected, we don't even know what she looks like. Why is Ron his best man and why does he end up with Pam. We never get to know how Nancy is feeling even in sex scenes when she is being whipped.

5. Final chapter is very rushed even compared to previous chapters.

All in all some good ideas, wish it was more substantial I guess.

last one put off me. after the rape.

This was a bs story...all the way through. What garbage.

Disappointing 😞.

I agree with Iramis comments and your ending if you call it that was way to rushed.