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by WickedEve07/07/04

thoroughly enjoyed

most of this poem, especially the 1st 2 stanzas. I stumbled on this part a little:
blue'd cloud never quite
darkling sough-sigh
river yet warm all
warm around and

I occasionally blame those clumsy reading moments on my southern accent... more like a southern accident.

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