by yowser
For a slick graphic brochure on this, go to flickr and search for: fitbutt
Funny! And kudos on a well-written story that has obviously been proofread. There are countless stories on this site where the storyline is imaginative and interesting but the errors are totally distracting. In so many I see writers thank their editors and I can't help but wonder, if this is the improved version how bad was it before?!? Congrats again on a great submission!