All Comments on 'Fitbutt Debut'

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TinyHoustonTinyHoustonabout 7 years ago
Where?

Is there a website or anything I can find more into about this?

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 7 years ago
funny

I loved it, so funny!!!

yowseryowserabout 7 years agoAuthor
Brochure

For a slick graphic brochure on this, go to flickr and search for: fitbutt

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Well done!

Funny! And kudos on a well-written story that has obviously been proofread. There are countless stories on this site where the storyline is imaginative and interesting but the errors are totally distracting. In so many I see writers thank their editors and I can't help but wonder, if this is the improved version how bad was it before?!? Congrats again on a great submission!

AlinaXAlinaXover 1 year ago

I'm sorry. I keep imagining a fizzy bath bomb.

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