All Comments on 'Rolling On Again'

I love your work!!!!!

Rolling on to the next of your poems... ;-)

we have a song, what works in a song, often does not work in a poem, and vice versa. decide what you want to do.

Rolling on again- da da dada da....

Rolling on again- da da dada da....

Rolling on again

Sounds good as a song.

"Years go by

Eons pass

And yet still another day

And always I will find myself,"

Good rule of thumb, never use "eons pass"

As I said earlier you have a good ear.

I like some of your lines in here! I wish I had some line breaks for my weary eyes....

it would help to use a line break after each "rolling on again." :)