by CavyConsultant
Great twist. And people reading incest porn should hardly be judgy about a little piss. There are plenty of people who would be totally put off by that part of it. Keep writing. Continue this good story.
I did not see that coming, pun intended. This cries out for a sequel.
i like the twist at the end. now i know why he realised it was his mom. donny doesn't have a cunt. any chance on getting more chapters to this story where the mom explores some fetishes?
Wow,,I loved it for the thought you'd just fucked your son,,but the twist at the end was the icing,,,great writing,,keep them coming.
I expected incest since it was in that category. If I I had known the story also had pissing in it, I would have skipped it. An author's note at the beginning re the pissing would have been good.
So his mom "thought " she heard a girl upstairs,didnt see a girl come in her house and thought her son was straight? Ookay sure .
I need more. What happens next. How is Donny tied to the bed naked explained with his buddy in the shower?
since it was a co-worker in the shower when Donny felt pussy he knew it was"mom"