by Elloelle
Tears, I have not laughed that hard in a long time. Thanks for a great story. Don't worry about the people who don't get it.If they don't get it, they haven't been fucking long enough!
Writing good comedy is hard, but you are well on your way. This has some really funny word pictures and phrases and I really enjoyed it.
That's some funny shit there. "... Like a kitten when you drop a refrigerator on its tail..." The visuals were priceless. You got any more stories like that?
I found you in the author's hangout and decided to read one of your pieces. This was a funny read. I'm partial to 1st person POV stories. Great job🌹Kant
You have a real talent to describe an ordeal play by play and keeping the reader totally involved. I'm still laughing.