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All Comments on 'No Easy Exit'

by tungtied2u

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Your

verse is getting leaner and cleaner. The way you're writing now, I suggest dropping capital letters - you seem to place them a bit randomly. Good read!

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
enjoyed

fun word play and pace lighten some heavier messages

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
interesting read

I especially found the 3rd stanza to be uniquely worded.

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