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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2207/07/04

Your

verse is getting leaner and cleaner. The way you're writing now, I suggest dropping capital letters - you seem to place them a bit randomly. Good read!

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by annaswirls07/08/04

enjoyed

fun word play and pace lighten some heavier messages

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by WickedEve07/13/04

interesting read

I especially found the 3rd stanza to be uniquely worded.

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