All Comments on 'Avatara'

that hat concealed so much depravity??

Nice poem...I think it needs to be a movie.

: )

...can I not love this? Stand against that wall baby, I'm on the loose!

hear no evil see no evil speak no evil

lol

well fuck I guess I gotta write a new poem for tomorrow dont think I can top this black hat with a purple strip

nice job-- and I am kidding about the well fuck part but I am thinking I need to write a new poem now errrrr lol

Oh yes, baby, I like this. (panting) lol

This part is so hot:

ow

yes

my tie

yes my belt,

buckle ringing

call to service,

cool snake

on bare skin,

bare, cool flesh

to bite

and lick

snake-tongued,

flicking out and back

across my back

like prairie lightning,

this is one of the most forgettable poems ever written.