All Comments on 'Family Development Ch. 01: News!'

I enjoyed the story, and the incestual sex was great, but the familial relationships had me scratching my head (Mother, Daughter, Aunt, Niece, Granddaughter, Father, Uncle Grandfather, etc).

You may be interested to read Family Comfort, the first story about Claude. In a nutshell, Claude fathered Sally by their mother, Carla making Sally his sister as well as his daughter and therefore Nel is both his granddaughter and his niece. :-) MP2

For continuing the story. I've enjoyed it.

I appreciate your appreciation. MP2

Love the passion they all have for each other! Your writing gives up a lot of details that other writers lack these days. Keep up the amazing work!

Tired of always getting 5 stars. Great continuation. Glad to see Sally loves tuna fish!

1 thought - you may want to add a caveat at the beginning of this chapter that it’s a continuing story and readers will get more out of it if the start with Family Comfort. Just a suggestion.

“Development” is a continuation of the core relationships, but it is also a sequel and a complete tale in its own right. One does not have to read “Tom Sawyer” to enjoy “Huckleberry Finn.” I hope I continue to earn your readership with every chapter. Keep on keeping on. All feedback is welcome! MP2 :-)

I just realized I’ve been misreading your “handle”... Go Ducks! Anaheim or Oregon? Either way, sorry for the misnomer! MP2 :-(

i was beginning to like your interpretation - god sucks. i just don't want to get hit by a lightning bolt!!

And although true - you don't need to read The Adventures of Tom Sawyer to enjoy Huck Finn - the background and understanding of the characters gained reading one story helps you enjoy reading the other. Hopefully that will be the same with these stories.