Love the stories with the pics!
Show us some more of that hot body.
you gotta show us those tits
need more picture with better angles to see more
i liked it but i want to see more the pics
People read erotica to get off...some may find the artistic value in it, but then again, some don't. So if you're going to place a story in the illustrated section, make sure your pictures are worth gettin off to.
Considering 99% of stories on lit. have NONE, what is everyone complaining about? Ever try to take pics of someone in a car? It isn't as easy as it looks! Yes, the pics could have been sharper, but I for one am glad they are there. Bravo, Jthserra!!
Very erotic great pictures - keep it up!!!
Great story - short but really erotic
This reminds me of something I did on a long road trip... you never really know how fun those car washes can be till you get one with a lover in the passanger seat.
had a few incidences yet to be published here, and this makes me realy think i should get the old pen and paper out.
cant wait till i can drive now.
nice rhythm. better pics wud hav helped,but alas, mobile cameras hav limits. dont forget to keep ur digicam with u next time for better pics, buddy.
Loved this story and feel like I've got to go have my car washed complete with "hot wax"! I always thought the car wash would be a great place to grab a "quickie".
Now that was a carwash!!!!!
This was very amateurish. The Photos were terrible. Read more professional level stories, and keep trying. You will improve.
the story and pictures were horrible. you should find a new hobby
The story was very plausable, and for short story was well done. It gives ones mind a chance to imagine and think. Like good writers used to do before the public became so jaded and mentally crippled, or just plain lazy; for my self I say well done.
I've seen a 12 year old write a more "erotic" story!! And unless you are 7 this is just bad DO BETTER USE YOUR IMAGINATION!!!
Okay I like the idea. Bad execution. There's a lot of potential to this..
dnt listen 2 those ppl who said they dnt like this story
I loved it. It was a real turn on 4 me & gave me a new idea 4 me & my bf 2 try..we have this thing where we try to have sex in as Many different places as possible no matter where or how risky:)
Never thought of a car wash in this way before! but think you could have opened up a whole new world to me! Beautifully written too! Imagery is great! Keep writing!
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