All Comments on 'Callused Palms'

The discription of the hands is well done - just one typo "Spell check" didn't catch. I think you meant to say "Yet you reach out TO me".

Yet you reach out me

Taking me into your embrace

Holding my soul

In your callused palms.

Just a niggle because this is a nice piece of work from a relatively new (to me) poet.

Lovely Shoshana - we all have some kind of callus - but we need each other. Nicely done.

When I saw the title and that it was erotic... well, I thought, "Oh great, some silly poem about callused palms from too much masturbation." Thanks for writing a Good poem! :)

and so deep and sensul nd moving on so many levels at once. very romantic sho.

pj

with tender hands and thoughts, TK U MLJ LV NV