All Comments on 'Until Dawn: Curse of the Mountain'

I really hope you do continue the story but do not be like other writers who write 6-7 chapters or more and then just stop `. You have no idea how frustrating that is for a reader to really get into a story 6-7 chapters deep and then get thrown under the bus when the writer does not finish the story. Over 85-90% of the stories I have read on this site are unfinished or if they do end the writer leaves so many unanswered questions you are so frustrated that it ended this way you probably will never read anything by that writer again. Retired Army NCO

But I hate to break it to you, not everyone has a clue about "Until Dawn"

Obviously you're young but I'd bet most readers here haven't got any idea what that is. You need to consider that when you write. Not that you can't write the story but you need to put more information up front.

Then you tell us to watch a video that I can't find on youtube. I can find tons of videos about until dawn but nothing like you mention. Again a link or better description.

Readers shouldn't have to spend an hour researching just to read a short story. 3*

Please keep updating this story whenever you get the chance. This is a great story idea that shouldn't go to waste. But be sure not to make it too long and burn yourself out. A lot of writers on this site seem to like starting series then shutting down without even a goodbye note.

Oh, I like this. I really want to see this continue, and where you take it. I half-imagine, half-fear a climactic *pun intended* scene where, nearly sated, the Wendigos' inner nature reasserts itself and they go all praying mantis on the girls.

"Yes! YEEEEEES-*CHOMP*"

But then, I'm a sick fuck.

Can you make Hannah Alpha of the wendigos and have some She-wendigo on male action?Otherwise very good but please keep in mind that fucking all night doest help you from hiportermia that much.

It's been 5 years when are you going to release the part 2 you promised?

You were doing so good out here until this pos story. ALL HAVE RECEVIED 5. Not gong to rate a pos story about a video game. -5 Willam Fort Worth, Tx

I’m not going to continue reading this crap. You were doing so good!!! Only one more to go on your line up. Did I say -5 on this one. How about Dragon Farce doing the music? You have many fine stories out here. Let this pos

Be. And bring us more on the others please!??

This one needs to end now. So many others from this Author need to continue on!?!? William Ft Worth TX