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by tungtied2u

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lipsticksunset1984lipsticksunset1984almost 20 years ago
Nice...

....read. Much enjoyed this, tung.

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
A steel-jawed poem

about a frightening situation. Sometimes an unwavering smile is medicine, even if we'd rather cry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Strength.......

...in horrifying situations makes humour possible. This siimple, gentle prayer for recovery from cancer is very poignant.

AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
Took me two reads

to get this wholly, not because of you but because the poem deserves a thoughtful reading. It says a great deal in few words, which is imo very very good. The juxtaposition of the familiar and the frightening is what really makes it special, I think. :)

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
very nice!

hitting close to home with this, but i leave smiling, very nice job here. i hope she wins! cheers!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
painful subject

but god, you handled it great! This is powerful writing.

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