All Comments on 'Redhead Jess and the Gym Shower Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What?

How does a shemale have a G-spot?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Suspiciously

Another writer here also uses the phrase, "fucking hell" almost constantly in lieu of other exclamatories. Makes one wonder.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

fucking hell is British like bloody hell also used in Brit porn especially older guys

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wet, Wild and oh so Sexy

I stumbled a bit at first, I had thought our prime characters were in a High School gym, so I was confused by references more specific to an open to the public fitness center. A sexy tale, I wanted more,.. and was often so involved that I wanted to insert my own dialogue ( your lines were fine,..) I wanted to high-jack your story and run with it, kudos! I was hooked, more please!

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