there should be a part 2 and it should be him and his mom out by a lake in broad daylight while a few others are fishing swimming, etc....
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Anonymous02/25/05
Business trip gone wild
There difently needs to be more chapters to this story!
Especially the Mom and her Son!
Loved the story keep up the good work!
But do write more on the Business trip gone wild!
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Anonymous07/13/05
you made this mom think
i am mom of two teens and i do think this story is close to reality because my both sons make lewd passes and i know they are just waiting for green light.
Good work .
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Anonymous02/05/06
Fucking my mom
Fantastic story. It reminds me when I fucked my mom for 4 years. My dad died when I was 14. Mom started dating (fucking) other men soon. She would tell me about her date when she returned home. I offered to fuck her but she would not fuck me until one time she did not get fucked on her date. She came home horny. As she was telling about being horny, I started touching her tits. Soon I was rubbing her pussy. I then fucked her. After the first time we fucked I would fuck her each time she returned from her dates. When she returned from her dates I would eat her pussy while she told me about her date and then I would fuck her. We fucked for four years until I moved away.
Mom would visit me and we continued to fuck. I started sharing mom with other men. I enjoyed seeing her get fucked by other men. I would her pussy after she fucked other men and then I fucked her. I really enjoyed sharing mom with black men. We would go to a bar and pick up black men. Mom got married and we stopped fucking.
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Anonymous02/06/06
boring my ass any thing but
it is any thing but boring you left an opening you have a lot to this please do not make the next part2 a 3 or 6 parts keep it like it is
don't listen to that asshole who wrote the last comment he just jelious that you are better writer then he will ever be write at least 10 chapters of this and that asshole should go to hell
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Anonymous03/30/06
Great Strory
Don't take any notice of the prune who wrote your story was not good. I thoroughly enjoyed it and YES please write another chapter. Maybe mum takes in both holes.
Keep writing.
Mike NZ
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Anonymous09/26/07
maid
not much detail on the action with the maid
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Anonymous10/03/07
Please continue
Please continue with your story. I'd like to see you pick up with the maid, and perhaps later her son joins in. Just a thought. Good story though.
Good concept and situation. Just a constructive comment or two. A little more build up and interaction between Jane and Todd before the actual action would make it better for me. Also, just a bit of narrative about how the maid turned up. Did she walk in for a reason, see Jane and get "horned up" and couldn't help but stay, did she maybe see Jane in the lobby and feel attracted to her? Just a few things that I felt might help. If you don't think so, I understand.
Keep the story going, though. Need to get the maid and Todd involved both singly and together. Keep it up... so to speak.
yes you need to continue this story it is damn good
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Anonymous04/12/08
certainly had me horny and hard
great story,enjoyed the incest aspect.Looking forward to the next chapter and perhaps some anal sex?There's nothing like anal, slow and deep... squirting my hot cum up a nice, tight ass in one of my favourite things.
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Anonymous03/13/10
Carrie, You're hot!
Carrie, I've seen your photo in your bio and you're hot. If you were my mum I'd be fucking you for sure.
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Anonymous04/15/12
Please continue with Mom...
You know, ass, mouth, cunt and give a lot of details.
NOT BAD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOTHER / SON STORIES TURN OUT TO BE THE BEST. SO LONG AS YOU DON'T ADD TOO MANY EXTRAS. MAYBE A MAID, OR EVEN A WAITER . THIS STORY HAS A LOT GOING FOR IT, USE WHAT YOU HAVE, ONLY ADD MORE DETAILS AND MORE SEX LOTS OF SEX................ A NEW FAN ..................LAROC OF AGES
from the mother who wrote "made this mom think." Her two teenage boys were always making lewd comments and passes at her, this was 10 years ago. I hope and trust that in the intervening time this lady's thought deep and hard about her sons and especially about what they've got jumping around in their pants. Lots and lots of moms would give anything to have a couple of kids like that. Holy shit, can you imagine how super-hard their young penises are, how much rich creamy semen they've got in their hot young balls? And to top it all, the horny lads are aching to stick their cocks up their own mother's legs, right up into the same warm wet hole they came out of, their own mother's ever-loving mommy-hole. Could be why we haven't heard from the lady recently. She's too busy watching her boys' sperm seeping out of her delightfully son-fucked cunt.
English
boring.....
stupid ending....
Enjoyed.
Was fun to read. Good job, shows potential :)
grrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeaaaattttttt
there should be a part 2 and it should be him and his mom out by a lake in broad daylight while a few others are fishing swimming, etc....
Business trip gone wild
There difently needs to be more chapters to this story!
Especially the Mom and her Son!
Loved the story keep up the good work!
But do write more on the Business trip gone wild!
you made this mom think
i am mom of two teens and i do think this story is close to reality because my both sons make lewd passes and i know they are just waiting for green light.
Good work .
Fucking my mom
Fantastic story. It reminds me when I fucked my mom for 4 years. My dad died when I was 14. Mom started dating (fucking) other men soon. She would tell me about her date when she returned home. I offered to fuck her but she would not fuck me until one time she did not get fucked on her date. She came home horny. As she was telling about being horny, I started touching her tits. Soon I was rubbing her pussy. I then fucked her. After the first time we fucked I would fuck her each time she returned from her dates. When she returned from her dates I would eat her pussy while she told me about her date and then I would fuck her. We fucked for four years until I moved away.
Mom would visit me and we continued to fuck. I started sharing mom with other men. I enjoyed seeing her get fucked by other men. I would her pussy after she fucked other men and then I fucked her. I really enjoyed sharing mom with black men. We would go to a bar and pick up black men. Mom got married and we stopped fucking.
boring my ass any thing but
it is any thing but boring you left an opening you have a lot to this please do not make the next part2 a 3 or 6 parts keep it like it is
hot story and good
don't listen to that asshole who wrote the last comment he just jelious that you are better writer then he will ever be write at least 10 chapters of this and that asshole should go to hell
Great Strory
Don't take any notice of the prune who wrote your story was not good. I thoroughly enjoyed it and YES please write another chapter. Maybe mum takes in both holes.
Keep writing.
Mike NZ
maid
not much detail on the action with the maid
Please continue
Please continue with your story. I'd like to see you pick up with the maid, and perhaps later her son joins in. Just a thought. Good story though.
Good story. Just a suggestion or two...
Good concept and situation. Just a constructive comment or two. A little more build up and interaction between Jane and Todd before the actual action would make it better for me. Also, just a bit of narrative about how the maid turned up. Did she walk in for a reason, see Jane and get "horned up" and couldn't help but stay, did she maybe see Jane in the lobby and feel attracted to her? Just a few things that I felt might help. If you don't think so, I understand.
Keep the story going, though. Need to get the maid and Todd involved both singly and together. Keep it up... so to speak.
getting hot
yes you need to continue this story it is damn good
certainly had me horny and hard
great story,enjoyed the incest aspect.Looking forward to the next chapter and perhaps some anal sex?There's nothing like anal, slow and deep... squirting my hot cum up a nice, tight ass in one of my favourite things.
Carrie, You're hot!
Carrie, I've seen your photo in your bio and you're hot. If you were my mum I'd be fucking you for sure.
Please continue with Mom...
You know, ass, mouth, cunt and give a lot of details.
NOT BAD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOTHER / SON STORIES TURN OUT TO BE THE BEST. SO LONG AS YOU DON'T ADD TOO MANY EXTRAS. MAYBE A MAID, OR EVEN A WAITER . THIS STORY HAS A LOT GOING FOR IT, USE WHAT YOU HAVE, ONLY ADD MORE DETAILS AND MORE SEX LOTS OF SEX................ A NEW FAN ..................LAROC OF AGES
In Answer to your question
YES to a part two!
I agree
At least a part 2 and 3!
a great story and I love the comment
from the mother who wrote "made this mom think." Her two teenage boys were always making lewd comments and passes at her, this was 10 years ago. I hope and trust that in the intervening time this lady's thought deep and hard about her sons and especially about what they've got jumping around in their pants. Lots and lots of moms would give anything to have a couple of kids like that. Holy shit, can you imagine how super-hard their young penises are, how much rich creamy semen they've got in their hot young balls? And to top it all, the horny lads are aching to stick their cocks up their own mother's legs, right up into the same warm wet hole they came out of, their own mother's ever-loving mommy-hole. Could be why we haven't heard from the lady recently. She's too busy watching her boys' sperm seeping out of her delightfully son-fucked cunt.
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