All Comments on 'Made to be a Transvestite Pt. 01'

No emotion; no story

No more please

The number of typos are distracting.

If the cross-dressing is going to be a major theme, maybe it should be in that category?

This story was so unbelievable (not counting the typos) as to be almost laughable. They should put the comments before the story so as to save people wasting their time reading it.

MECHMAN17, your tale rocks. What the three anonymous critics & Jimmcdonald609 (who thankfully seems to be possession of a healthy set of cojones) appear to have missed is that Literotica caters to those seeking FANTASY. MECHMAN17 you clearly have talent; with time & practice you will develop the finesse required to quieten the cowardly & impatient. Don't lose heart! I wanna hear the next part to your story so get to it!

But I want more of this, so please continue on and let us know how it is going. I for one would love to be in that position, but I am a bit old to be a girl friend to a young man, lol more like his mother. But I love to suck cock, and to offer my cute little butt for use would be heaven for sure. da.cd@frontier.com

It's a good start for part 1

the first time I went in to a bar was a few years ago when I walk in I saw men kiss men so I just walk up and older a pop the bar man said just pop I said yes sir then he hand me the drink when he did my hand touch his he said nice soft hands I thank him we got talking I keep looking at the others he told me you know your in a gay bar I told him no sir I ask him you want me to leave he said it up to you I told him I will stray he ask what I do for work I told just about anything how would you like to help me for the rest of to night I said yes I will pay you some money it be about five hours work I what do he want done there dishes to be wash for now and later help clean up when I close I said fine show me were the dishes are I walk back with him to the room I start to wash he came back and wrap a apron on me as he did he slap my ass I did not move he tie it up and said you have a nice ass then he padded it some more yes very nice I said I glad you like it sir here come the other boss he look at us and said why this man not in unfrom he told him he just started no well go put one on him the man told me to come with him we went to a room were there were outfits I remove my clothes I was now down to my underwear I ask him if he want me out of them he said yes I remove them as I bend to pick up my clothes he came behind me he put his hand my ass I did not move I told you want me to get dress now then I felt his finger go in my ass hole it hurt a bit soon he work it in and out he keep it up for awhile I just said yes then he pull out and shove his big hard cock in I cry out yes he told me I had that man come in there to yell at me to take you back here for this I told I was hoping you would I always want to be some one bitch he keep on banging me and after that he told me you are mine bitch now and I will dress you as one well I was dress in sissy girly clothes once I was dress a man came in he look at me and said what a lovey girly bitch boy you have boss the told him come in and see her she love to suck cock I knew what to do I just pull out his hard cock and suck that my girl you make a good bitch