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Evensong

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone07/11/04

Purple crow song?

doesn't matter, this is a great opening
is it her intent
to demand such attention
with her still, silent beauty?
Followed with a great rest of it, even the plum smoke

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by Syndra Lynn07/11/04

Very nice!

The words paint a lovely lavendar picture. Breathtaking!

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by Tathagata07/11/04

as always

a beautiful picture that leaves me wanting more.
Thank you

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Seattle.....

.....this is brilliant. The finish, the start...all of it.

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by fawnie07/11/04

every word

...captured images. truly a powerful piece.

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by LeBroz12/12/06

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With your words
She can be seen standing
Serene, demanding by her pose
Attention; all else disappears
As she continues to drive the world.

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by LeBroz05/11/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.



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