All Comments on 'Willing Slave, Unwilling Master Ch. 08'

I've figured out rose was used as a clone for organ harvesting, and I love the story, but come on plot line, hurry up and move to where we get rose fixed properly so she has longer than 2 months to live.

5 stars

JC

Love this series. A fascinating world.

please hurry with the next chapter....

Unlike Anonymous 'Sooo', it worries me not what Rose has been produced for. I'm just enjoying the progress of the story rather than being especially concerned about its destination.

Lue

I just ran across this story and read all 8 chapters today. It's so good! Can't wait for the next one!

~HisKitten

I always enjoy reading your work. Keep working hard Sir.

We're all rooting for you!

Sincerely, GriffinCri7

Couldn't help but read all 8 chapters at once. Now I'm hooked!

Another wonderful chapter, glad to see this update and good luck carrying forward.

5/5 Stars

much more please

Ahh been waiting for this chapter since January and it was well worth the wait :) and now I get to look forward to part 9. As always this was another excellent instalment it will deffinaty be interesting to see where the story will go from here.

It feels like the story is really starting now find safety and a cure for Rose then start a family

...but more sex please.

I was afraid you had abandoned us :-)

While a litte bit of sex now and then would be great, i'm much more interested in the ongoing of the story.

So keep on!

Thanks a lot!

Your writing, your characters, and your world-building have continued to impress and delight your audience, including me.

Please feel free to contact me (reply to this comment) if you would like another proofreader. A work as creative and earnest as this deserves all the support to have it continue. Long live your creative spark!

I can't exactly fap to it but this series is better than many sci-fi novels I've bought.

An extra set of eyes would be great, feel free to contact me at: lifeonvil@gmail.com - Thanks.

And thank you to everyone else for your kind comments, I hope to have chapter nine with you soon. =D

interesting characters, interesting plot. please continue

Arghhh I'm almost afraid to go to the next (last?) chapter!

J

I don't think those are really enforcers.

This has become one of the most interesting stories on the site. Exceptional.

Good ending so now I've got to start the next chapter.

Scary... confusing... loving it...

Like the best of Literotica, an actual story, wrapped around something sexy.

Isn’t it a nice change to read a story with an actual storyline instead of over the top SEX SEX and more SEX. It’s usually the other way around all sex and no storyline. Well done. So far⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️