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The hottest one yet!!!
This is your best yet sweets. Well rounded and totally hot!
Fabulous.
Yep, HOT is right!
Lucky, this IS the hottest one yet! Superb writing, you did a great job. Well, I'm wet...
Lou :p
Work well rewarded
Lucky, the craft and hard work you put into this is so obvious and I was very pleased to be allowed to judge. I do like to watch as well as read! The "countdown"! Great idea.
SPANK!
Still squirming and trying hard not to fall off my chair. A serious turn on. Beautiful flow. I'm impressed (and i got to play with cloudy *grin*)
Wonderful job, Lucky! Fit for Lesbian category as a stand alone besides the olympic series.
simply, AWESOME.
vella~
wow...
Forgive me, I'm having a hard time with words at this precise moment. DAMN!!!!! That was one of the best written and hottest stories I've ever read. Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got to go read it a hundred times more.
Sizzlin'!
I think you've set the bar for the rest of the Olympics almost impossibly high! Helluva hot story, Lucky!
Riveting
Lucky, that was incredibly hot! I am tingling all over!!
Lucky
The lit olympics has been a fun time for all and some great stories have come out, those that tickle the funny bone and some that tickle a little lower.
There is a saying, for when you finally break the last barriers that separate your work from good to great. They say you have arrived. After reading this one, I have to say.
You have arrived. Enjoy the rareified air, few people ever get a story that is so complete from mind to paper.
-Colly
p.s. thanks for pairing me with the gosling :)
The best yet
The best!
Nothing more to say- this is your best yet: well written, engaging and hot.
Sailor
(Almost forgot to vote LOL)
Too keen to comment heheee
Easily one of the best chapters in this saga!!!
Fantastic job lucky!!!!!
dm xoxoxooxox ;-)
awed and speechless
Lucky.......Once again you have rendered me almost incoherent. An incredible piece of work. I hardly know what to say. I'm still stunned at the combination of ingenuity, imagination and consumate skill that produced this piece. I was there, watching, breathless. Wow.
Mat xxxxx
Gold Metal Performance!
Incredible lucky, absolutly incredible! Great reading and incredibly hot! You are now the high mark for all the rest of the Lit Olympics stories to aim for.
P.S. Thanks for letting my judge Colly & Gosling.
Oh, lucky!
Excellent writing - hot and sexy and naughty and fun! And I really love the character pairings! Damn! (I think I need to find Honey very soon!) *grin* Lit Olympics are in full gear with this erotic addition! Well done, lucky!
Loved it
Wonderfully sexy and witty! Very nice use of detail. Seems like you had fun writing this and you definitely conveyed that sense of frivolity and heat. More more!!
Another winner
Good one Lucky, I really enjoyed that.
Carl
I'm emoticonless!!
*insert little bowing guy here*
You've left me speechless, Lucky. Damn, THAT takes talent! :D
- Mindy
:D (one more for the smile)
Marvelous!
You leave me breathless and wanting more, as always.
Great God!
Ok, heartbeat finally back to normal. Now I can comment. That was THE hottest story I've read in a while. And I was crazy about you earlier, now I don't know how I'm going to manage.
Wow Lucky
that was great
Great sex with a surprtise ending
Very well written and full of prtovocative ideas and theames
Phenomenal
The story telling blows me away, and the competition makes me squirm. You tell a wicked tale, woman. Makes me wish I'd been hangin' in the AH when the Lit Olympics were conceived. ~Imp
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