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by Anonymous

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by lipsticksunset198407/11/04

I like....

...the raw feel, and especially like the last 3 lines.

don't talk
don't kiss me.

just do it again.

There is a whole lot there, much more than meets the eye. The better the lead-in, the stronger those lines would become!

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by WickedEve07/13/04

a slutty poem

that doesn't say, "Hey, I'm just another cliche fuck poem."

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