All Comments on 'Telekinesis - the Undoing Ch. 09'

I really liked the section where the lovely lady was dripping Bobby's semen and he gallantly licked it up.

The walking around erected in the open is a very exciting proposition. Now someone ought to find them and watch and wank, don't you suppose?

Dr Max, I congratulate you. A crisp, accurate and exciting delineation of some wonderful sex-sessions between two innovative people. I recently tried to read this whole series, but gave up in ch. 3; clearly, I didn't put in enough effort - but I now intend to return and have another go. As a motor mechanic, I enjoyed the detail of the car; although you didn't mention the effect on the lady of warm air from the bonnet-louvres, which I think she might feel issuing under her shoulder-blades to further erotic benefit. I especially liked the absence of whimsy in this chapter. A strong five stars!

Vince

Ooo.!! Sex on the bonnet of an E type, every boys dream and Mandy made it for Bobby, she'll have a place in his heart forever . Poor ole Bobby Robinson none of the girls he has had have dared to admit to having sex with him thereby leaving his reputation unenhanced (sic). Poor ole Bobby.

So Max last chapter!

Ref. Vince yes I agree with that statement wholeheartedly, and knowing the writer professes to have no knowledge or interest in cars I find the atmosphere conjoured up by those paragraphs remarkable.

As I 've said before , well done Max.