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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good start

I liked your story. A little different and a little light but shows promise.

Woody

blueexoticablueexoticaabout 7 years ago
Interesting

You have my attention...please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
more

wish this chapter was longer but i like it so far

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Supreb!!!!

Please update, lovely beginning.

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 7 years ago
I know they are supposed to be short stories

but I'm interested in some back story and I'm sure you could turn this into a full length serial.

More chapters, more information, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Boss and Secretary

I like the idea of love in the office so those are good. Or even a high school or college piece. Please make them longer however.

LadyBug19LadyBug19about 7 years ago
Love it!

I love it! Hope to see more soon, but please make them longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
looking forward to more

I like where this is going!

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