by Wellwisher100
Please write more such stories of hairy pits and voluptuous women. This one made me gush from my loins and I have read it many times now.
Very well written, but there's a few things that were jarring for me. First off, I could tell that you're a man. The best written stories (for me) on Lit are the ones where the gender of the author is not telegraphed by the writing. Though your main character was female, she often spoke like a man. I think you may have been aware of this on some level, because you emphasized the word "lesbian" many times. In short, you were trying to hard.
Also, women don't produce to milk until after the babe is born. Mumtaz would have been producing colustrum, which neither looks or tastes like milk. I've had the unbelievable pleasure of being with a woman during pregnancy and breast feeding, and there is a big difference between the two.
In general, it's good writing. It didn't get me wet, but that was because I clued into you being a man within a few paragraphs so the tale seemed less authentic, less real to me.
That was pretty hot... <a href=""http://adultspace.com="" target"=_blank">Lesbo</a> stories are pretty aMAZING
i loved this story, and i found the dirty talk to definitely be one of the hottest bits! Made me so wet and feeling delicious, thank you for a beautiful well-written story!