All Comments on 'Ancient echoes'

You have some great phrases here. I love this:

Retire to bed

rest in generations? arms

those before you

knew all this too

full of sights and sounds...

I can imagine it all right down to the smell of furniture wax and the ticking of a grandfather clock

Great job

....I remember what this looked like at the beginning...you did an incredible job letting it ripen and making it as strong as it is.

i'm too young for the good old days, but this brings back memories of squeeky stairs. lol

enjoyable and well constructed poetry.

much enjoyed, the phrasing is really superb. Thank you!

You described this so vividly, bringing out smiles and warnings, nostalgic and heartwarming. Thank you.

Multi-generational celebration

Celebrated here;

It's like at Christmas &

To Grandmother's house we go.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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Reminescent of times past ~ made more clear by the beautiful metaphorical references.

Reminescent of times past ~ made more clear by the beautiful metaphorical references.