All Comments on 'Vampires Don't Sparkle Ch. 13'

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ender2k2kender2k2kabout 7 years ago
Good chapter

I am glad you are continuing this story. The two main characters have a great relationship. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I liked the continuation of the story but the chapter feels rushed, or at least in need of some proofreading and editing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love this story!

I check your page everyday to see if there is a continuation to either this series or the fairy series. I enjoy your storytelling and am drawn into your stories. Please keep them coming! - AV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
That was a interesting chapter.

I'm curious as to what is happening with Ben. He is starting to develop powers that only pure blooded vampires are supposed to possess. I'm looking forward to seeing what is going on with him. I look forward to the next chapter have a good day.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 7 years ago
Tongue

Just how long is his tongue if it can do circles around her g spot? He can probably clean his own ears out with it. LOL.

Iread2relaxIread2relaxabout 7 years ago
Maestro84

She's going to conceive isn't she?

ArgentPenumbraArgentPenumbraabout 7 years ago
Bravo!

This tale of Ben’s evolution ‘Sparkles like a Diamond’.

I adore the main characters and I love the developing plot-lines.

I fervently hope that you are able to find the inspiration and the desire to continue this story for many more chapters.

Kind Regards

Argent

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