All Comments on 'Hunting Atalanta Pt. 04'

by Boadicea

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Arioso almost 20 years ago

Interesting

Very well written, and you draw the tension out deliciously. Both of your characters have good depth to them, although sadly, it seems like your third character -- the battle of wills between these two strong individuals -- is threatening to become a caricature. Athena's soliloquy about Doms did possess a grain of truth where your Hunter is concerned: he seems to prefer to dominate those who do not wish to be dominated, the strong, the independent, the resolute woman, almost in confirmation of Athena's assertion that Doms just want to prove that women are whores who "can't live without a good, deep dicking".

I can't tell whether that is going to be the only theme of this story -- whether this will be yet another familiar tale of a strong-willed and accomplished woman learning that all she really wants is for a strong-willed man to control her -- or if Hunter will actually give her some honesty and respect in return.

However, your writing is so enticing, and you're doing such a good job of dissecting the power-exchange that I'm looking forward to finding out. Thank you for a very provocative read.