All Comments on 'Dominated by a Billionaire'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Damn.

soppingwetpantiessoppingwetpantiesabout 7 years ago
Pretty damn good for your first story

Made my panties wet. 👙👙👙👙👙 (five panties)

Xzy89c1Xzy89c1about 7 years ago
Great effort

Pleass keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
You are a gifted writer

This is one of the best pieces that I have read on this site. You are seriously talented. Would you consider continuing this story, please? No matter what, please keep publishing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More Please!

I hope you add more to the story.

adgeonadgeonabout 7 years ago
Loved it

Solid first effort. Looking forward to your next daydreams.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent start

This deserves a sequel! Look forward to reading more :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More Please!!!

More please, would like to see where this leads.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
OMG!!!

I really hope there will be more to this story but seeing as how it's about 7 months old, I'm guessing there won't be. Too bad...this had all the earmarks of being a great series.

Iamcurious999Iamcurious999over 6 years ago
Stranger Things Have Happened!

Stranger things have happened. I don't know when, but I am sure that they have...!

Here is a line for a follow-up. Oliver and Aubrey fall in love and get married.

One can dream, can't one, and if you dream, they say "dream BIG"!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I literally gushed

Please if you can make a sequel to this. This was one of the best erotica stories I've read in a long time. I can barely orgasm anymore, but this had me orgasm twice in one read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

i love this story.. although I wished it was a bit longer. she submitted a bit too fast, i love the tension ! but this is a great read, thanks a lot

Aussie1951Aussie1951about 3 years ago
I must agree

For your first story not a bad start that’s for sure. Would’ve be good if there was another chapter or two to this story. You left it open so give it some thought..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ May give you some inspiration

DinglepumpkinDinglepumpkinalmost 3 years ago

Hot AF. Next step, he becomes her patron and supports her art? HOT AFFFFF.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

What a strong story! Well done Sir.

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