All Comments on 'The Billionaire Passenger Ch. 02'

Seriously, i have to say this why do you have your female characters instantly accept sex with the male characters?

The transition between flirting, intrigue, more flirting, followed by some emotion or grand gesture thus leadinv to romance and/or sex, needs to be flawless. However, because you don't add enough detail and romance into the story, especially the transitions, your female characters come off as a slut that will fuck anyone if they are attractive or is well endowed. Also, your female characters tend to contridict themselves and why they act the way they do.

Due to this your work seems amatuerish and ugly like a house without supports colapsing in on itself.

I'm deeply sorry, If I offended you by pointing out any of your shortcomings.

I like the fact you read the stories and found time to respond. I will think about your feedback and put it into the next work I do. Thanks.