All Comments on 'Black Velvet Ch. 01'

hate to see JEANINE, killed off, its time for Ferrel, Mr. 'C' and his rogue cell, to be wiped out, in this story.....

You think your eyes are open

But in truth they really are closed

NBWBYASAEAH

A double murder, another family dead.Ok make it triple. A storm, which is still taking too damn long to come. Seriously WifeWatchman, hurry it up, I don't wanna wait for my execution any longer. Ahem, a father who was on the path of darkness may now align himself with the light now that his loved was killed. Or was he responsible for it?

A teacher and a student killed mid-coitus, a scandal brewing in a prestigious school, an old lover err partner of the Commander may be a suspect. He will let her go though, I mean she did fuck his brains out. Or will he put duty above lust?

Two non-connecting murders, one personal, one complicated though could be connected to more murders. Obviously the Commander will handle it but how will he? Will Teresa blame herself like The Crowbar with Pete Feeley for not contacting her leader first? Only the Watchman knows.

Ps: Ok man I can see you're on a roll. first a complicated case from one to another, and now a personal one? Geez you're definitely on the way to start the storm. But why kill Jeanine? I mean is that a plot device to make Michael Burke align with the commander or Todd to get his kids back? Because it was mean dude, it was mean

>;(. Well to the next chapter

to see Jeanine Burke killed off. Honestly, you can't say you didn't see it coming, but damn. Why didn't she turn to Todd or Don?

Jeanine Burke being killed has been on the cards for a while Vincent if you really read the posts and not carp on about WW.

She did not go with the plan at the hotel and was noted in women talk and past on to the others hubby. One ex SBI agent will I hope be the one who done it and then Todd can get even in his own way as his kids will grow up without their mother. Michael is as guilty as the perp on this one as he had to know what the policy of that group was.

As for the double murder being off the ICs area he can help by not pushing if he feels it is worth it and lets be honest here, that happens so often in real life you sometimes wonder how, but that is down to the other detectives being not so bright or not wishing to rock boats.

But with Jeanine's murder we all know that the Huntress is in the shadow as her apprentice has been given a job by her Mr C and Huntress and Jeanine were friends and we are about to find out how she died. I would bet a rifle shot from above (top of cliff) as it seemed to be close to the stream where IC found her body. A specialist type of aim and shot required to hit her in the only area she could be seen and for a very short period of time a nano second even. I would love the IC to pull in his ex to ask a few questions just to stir up her sheriff husband as well as her as she is a white supremacist. I like this story WW and the way it has started off looks like it could turn out to be one of your best stories. Just please have a go at that media bitch as she is getting totally out of hand, give her over to Cindy to sort out. ***** Iceman

Thanks for commenting everyone. I love the comments, be they for right or wrong, as they show what y'all are thinking about my writing.

First, for Vincent: I'm not trying to be mean. Good people get hurt; good people die. My stories are not all hunky-dory and good sex. Remember St. Matthew 5:45. And remember that we have to have pain and bad times to contrast with the joy and good times.

As to the rest, I think the story arcs are finally going in a good direction. There's a LOT more not yet revealed that is to come. These story arcs will wrap up in the story "summer", and then we'll head to the ultimate finale for Christmas Eve. :o)

And keep an eye on that redoubtable Bowser... :o)

Good writing.

So Superior Bloodlines, the black militants, the rogue CIA unit and the mysterious Mr. C get theirs with a showdown this summer. And then the Oldeeds Group moves into Crowbar's cross-hairs? Then it comes down to some new prep as Crowbar's next big bad is created with a long setup?

Or is Mr. C and his groups the big bad of the year and the Oldeeds Group won't get touched until next year? With a new big bad popping up the following year?

I just ask that you continue with the IC series for as many years into the future as you have in years of the past, don't end the IC stories as you seem to put out around Christmas time. We know from past stories that he lives long enough to take his daughter and hands her over to her husband so that is many years ahead and therefore I plead for your talents for writing stories that have us all thinking to continue for many years to come. Forget the anons who try to belittle your writing skills and look towards your true followers. Iceman

but somehow the same characters play an abetting part. TK U MLJ LV NV

because its difficult to lead from a. 2nd or 3rd position. TK U MLJ LV NV

Oh no. Now that is a shame but sometimes the 'good' have to die as well. 5⛤

*****What an exciting beginning. Thanks for sharing.