All Comments on 'Bastette Wants It'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I can't stand 'stories' ...

... where the 'writer' considers it OK to use swear words at every opportunity!!

1* because I can't vote it lower!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I didn't notice the swearing ....

.... probably because it was in keeping with the character of the participants. Likewise the fairly simplistic plot seemed appropriate. A few typos, but overall a pretty good job. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Great story please keep writing

lalilollylalilollyalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Re: Swear words

Hello Anonymous,

This is a point-of-view story, mostly from the POV of the step-dad character. The observations are all his, and he swears... hence the swearing.

And seriously, why does it bug you? You want to read sexy stories with no swear words? Most of the words for our sexual body parts are swear words as well... Maybe you should try some Little Golden Books instead.... ; D

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