by lalilolly
... where the 'writer' considers it OK to use swear words at every opportunity!!
1* because I can't vote it lower!!
.... probably because it was in keeping with the character of the participants. Likewise the fairly simplistic plot seemed appropriate. A few typos, but overall a pretty good job. I enjoyed it.
Hello Anonymous,
This is a point-of-view story, mostly from the POV of the step-dad character. The observations are all his, and he swears... hence the swearing.
And seriously, why does it bug you? You want to read sexy stories with no swear words? Most of the words for our sexual body parts are swear words as well... Maybe you should try some Little Golden Books instead.... ; D