All Comments on 'It's Too Cliché...Right? Ch. 02'

you are soooo good!

Erotic but not pornographic. Not yet anyway.

Well done,

Five stars and more to come as this series continues.

Can't wait for the rest of the chapters to be. Posted. This is addictive. Really enjoy all your stories. Thank You.

Something is going to happen, or at least get set up. They should become friends comfortable with each other. I still say have them study at Evan's house, and let him strip to change his clothes, and Brad can see everything (or nearly everything) Evan's got!

You guys are too kind. It really puts a smile on my face to read your nice comments. #feelsgoodman. Lol. Anyway, I'm not going to say what's going to happen in the following chapters, but stripping and a lot of ogling is not out of the question. Haha

I love the way you have written everything. Honestly can't wait to read all chapters when's they become available. Well done! 10/5 from me :)

The dialogue is very believable. There's so much of it though. I found myself skipping a lot of it in this chapter to get to what actually happens. Not sex, just action.

Maybe there is a lot of dialog but that's just how I write. Personally, I like stories with a good back and forth between characters, especially so when it involves a bigger group of characters because I always felt it was weird if only two people were talking in a group of 5 for example. I guess it just boils down to personal preference. Not everyone will like my style of writing and that's okay.

Don't change anything! I really love your writing style and the back n forth dialogue. Catching up on chapters today after having been gone for work. I think you've done a great job with character development and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Love the way you put the story together, it suspends reality enough so you can in your minds eye, see, feel, the conversations going on around you, like your a silent member of the group just watching, love it, nenvr change they way you write, thanks again. AAAAA+