All Comments on 'Is That For Me?'

Just a little mushy, isn't it? Maybe not mushy but too much nice. But a good ending and that's important.

That was most excellent

Mushy, not for me. Excellent dialogue, well suited to the era the story's set in, and well executed, very sensual sex scenes too!

Nicely done!

weak weak! It even seems the feedBack befrore me is wrtten by the same author! bad, badl,bad!

This would be one of the best written stories I have read in a really long time. A real tribute to the author who almost made it feel as if the reader was actualy there at the time.

Please give me more as good as this one to read.

A real credit to the author.

Cheers

more to eat! This was really good. Hard to believe that they met in one chapter, made love in another, and decided to marry in the last. But it was a well crafted story and even somewhat realistic although erotic fiction tends to get to the point quicker than reality. But looking back - maybe it was the third date for them all before they hooked up. Some of the lines were quite visual such as "her tits jiggling delightfully as she moved" so overall it was entertaining. I look forward to reading more from this author. Thanks.

Yes it is only a Mouse Click so I take the opportunity to click. The story and narration is coming through nicely and it is requried to be continued - This I am mentioning with out going through the list as yet and it might have continued ? - and so I am hoping the continuation would be there for the readership to appreciate some more good reading. Please keep it up.

Outstanding story line and so well written. Very erotic and arousing without every 7other word being "cunt, or pussy or cock". These words all have their place but so many of the Literotica writers have these as their entire vocabulary. And that is much more of a turnoff than anything else, plus it shows the "writers" ignorance.

As in Daffyd Duck?! C'mon, give us a break. Couldn't get past that, sorry.

... is the Welsh spelling of David. Nowt to do with ducks!