All Comments on 'Him'

this a was poor story is shared none of the facts about her being ever hypnotize.

if not for the listing that said mind control there is nothing in the story that says it, it would have been nice if lets say the son walked in his dad giving her hypnotic tune up to reinforce is power over her then. or if it made a big deal a word or a line he used during the phone call to put her under. but neither of that was in the story.

sex story it gets 5 stars

but mind control it gets 0 stars

This is a pretty hot and well-written MC story.

masterkinggod seems to be under the misapprehension that MC is synonymous with hypnosis.

You need to expand this story. There's so many directions you can take it. Surprise us.