All Comments on 'Family Development Ch. 08: Game Day'

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Turtle1952Turtle1952about 7 years ago
This could be interesting

seems Kristy may be in for a threesome

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2about 7 years agoAuthor
L O L Turtle

You must be prescient. Read Chapter 10 :-) MP2

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2about 7 years agoAuthor
OOPS!

I meant Chapter 9... Turtle. :-( MP2

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
I have to commend

Both your LA freeway and 1970’s dodger knowledge. Only one very minor pasadena detail incorrect. You must be a reformed Angeleno. Again, great way to move the story forward, just wish it had been part of a bigger chapter. But, long or short, I love this story. 5 stars. Can’t wait for the next last chapter in this series.

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2over 4 years agoAuthor
So help me, please Goducks

What “Pasadena detail” did I get wrong? I always like my details to be accurate. Thanks for your compliments. MP2 :-)

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