All Comments on 'Black Velvet Ch. 03'

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tranzmanytranzmanyabout 7 years ago
Puppy points?

You can't eat puppy points. Brownie points on the other hand...

LostingorgiaLostingorgiaabout 7 years ago
Another Great Chapter

Ummm Puppy points.... are Good for the teeth!

and I agree with the Director I have the Bomb fire all built up and ready.......

Another Solid 5 * + for this installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
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I am almost at a point in reading where only if the answers are patently obvious do I guess at what is happening. This story has too many moving parts, from the deaths of both Michael and Jeannie Burke, the Board of Inquiry, the SBI Bill intrigue, to the Black Velvet serial killer.

Unless if the Black Velvet serial killer was in the car with Fuqua, my first guess was that the killer either worked for the funeral home or a supplier of the funeral home. Of course that would beg the question why not use the funeral home's crematorium to get rid of the bodies, unless if you want those bodies found?

Obviously the Board of Inquiry and the SBI Bill are linked, but is there a link to the Democrats to Superior Bloodlines other than maybe Fuqua who may have draped Michael Burke in Black Velvet to confuse the two competing cases?

Lot of food for thought and I am almost at the point of just reading this for pleasure rather than to stretch my mind to any degree.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesabout 7 years ago
It makes me WONDER ---

It is awfully easy to fake a suicide by handgun - just WHO DID kill Michael Burke?

666iceman666icemanabout 7 years ago
Blood thicker than water

IC is at or near being streeeeched to breaking point, He will get the Killer/killers of the Burke family and it may well not be pleasant for the perp. Blood thicker than water, but I am awaiting the time when blood faces blood in a family face off. Would be nice if the IC2 could catch that female senator doing something and put her away soon so she can learn to lean on people using her own power of "if it was 400 years ago" taking the pressure off the IC. Cindy is now my No1 person as she is thinking Melina and out aloud too, no love lost there! IC will take those out one at a time and over a few stories yet to come, tied in with other events as they happen. I am pleased that I do not live anywhere near to that TCPD area as life expectancy is not that good :<)) 5* Iceman

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchmanabout 7 years agoAuthor
Love it

"I am pleased that I do not live anywhere near to that TCPD area as life expectancy is not that good"

ROFLMAO! I love it.

Next chapter is submitted.

tazz317tazz317about 5 years ago
NOW IS THE TIME FOR THE SUPER SLEUTHS

to invade the spider web and re-assemble the strands; n TK U MLJ LV NV

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Is it Darkware using historic cases as a cover?

chytownchytown11 months ago

*****Wow this is good!!!!!! Thanks for sharing.

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum10 months ago

I’m not sure who the killer or killers are. But Darkwave must be in it somewhere working jor Mr C.and bloodlines. On a different note. Think Don’s trip to LA is to find Officer Towson brother’s son.

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